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Writing Quality: 5☆I don't count bad english or typos in these kind of reviews as they don't change the story, can always be edited and judging the authors english over small things like that is just unreasonable.Story Development: 5☆Even before any real big story development is made you can sometimes tell that it is good, and this is the case here too.If in these 12 chapters there would have been a big change, it would have already been bad in stories like this, so it is already good that, while you can already look in the future a little in the first chapter, there is no big change yet.The 'introduction chapter' tells you that in the next chapter from now there will definitely be some development in the next chapter.In other words, the pace of the story is well done.Character Design: 5☆Not much to say.In chapter 3 or 4 (I don't quite remember) we will be introduced to Ayane and we can already tell that she has a very special character and a very elaborate character design.Following that we get a glimpse of the reason for mc's attitude, which already hint on great character design for him.Later on in chapter 11 if I remember correctly, we get introduced to a student called Dracula as her surname. We also get a little explaination about the name and have a moment with her.While it was only speculation, I have made a comment at the end of the chapter that I have put my thoughts about her character in, and the fact that I was able to think of so many things already shows that she most likely also has a pretty special character on top of the bit that we already know.Somewhere we get a flashback to the prophecy and can see that even almost irrelevant background characters, such as the sage, don't lack personality, which is something I have only seen in 1 other novel for a just one character to be frank. If rating this 6☆ would be an option, I would choose it. Respect +1, sir author!Updating Stability: 4☆My sense of time us very bad, but (correct me if I'm wrong) I am pretty sure that, even tho we got daily chapter (I think at least...), the time in which they get uploaded isn't uniform.World Backround: 5☆Thank the god of fate, WE FINALLY GOT SOMETHING NEW AND AT LEAST A LITTLE ORIGINAL!!!
I love this story first couple of chapters could use a little word refinement but don’t let that turn you away from this great story I’m using my power stones on this story from now on as long as it isn’t dropped
???Great story! Everyone who's ever watched Naruto wondered about when he was a little baby.... I Seriously Can Not wait to read MORE!???
the book has a great structure adding with the author's mind set I say I will recommend this book the author took time organizing he's imagination it's a super????
Another good novel ruined by trash translator again.If the translator didn’t edit many parts and tried to westernized with no knowledge, the story will be the most interesting one of this year.Please remove the translator, Webnovel. If you use this person again, more good work will be ruined by this person again and again.
Do not get started. Story is pretty interesting but characters and setting are uneven. It is set in an alternative United States, NY where Businesses, Mafia, Government, and Karate people rule. Writing is often uneven. Events change sometimes, numbers change sometimes between chapters. Have to just let changes to characters or events not get to you.Alex is smart and dumb depending. He usually makes bad choices. He purposely lets situations get out of hand or goads people to hate/berate him. Gets a bit tedious at points as important part of living in society is publicly berating 'poor' people or people who dress normally, over and over and over. The story abruptly ends at 748 'golden eggs' and becomes new story at 749 'underground' with just Alex and cosmic karma magic realms with continuous tedious fights and new cardboard characters that you won't care about.It then ends up with Alex being an infinite-universes/multiverses timeline watcher/Fate and Alex messes around with different timelines for a while. He gets bored along with the reader, then literally jumps into a new timeline/universe where he forgets everything except what the new-timeline Alex knows. Its a different story starting at 886 'back to earth' with womanizing Alex with dramatic Debbie and (Yvonne since when?). Everyone is sleeping around and no one is really the same - liked the horse though - only character with real character. If you start the series at all, Stop reading/listening at 749. Gets tedious and story gets even more unsequenced and unbalanced after that.
Good read, if you ignore the first chapter requires a fass pass. The only problem I have is the translations after around chapter 100. The grammar is fine but the mix up of "he/him/she/her/they/them/I/you" was really annoying. Additionally, the names of techniques, weapons etc sometimes change from time to time which can be a slight inconvenience.
I hope you continue writing this. I will support this !
It's so nice to read something that feels real and yet is in a fantasy world. The allegories are amazing, it really reminded me of "The Lord of the Rings" the author's probable reference. I liked the characters. I enjoyed the world of BACU and am looking forward to discovering the wanderer's quest. Congratulations on the work, it made my month better and the expectation for the next chapters makes me anxious, but excited. Please don't screw it up.
Finally something new and different. The novel's plot is very enjoyable and the updating stability plus the length of each chapter is also pretty good. There was not once that i was bored or weirded out in the novel. Keep up the good work.??.
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