janmowi
I take back my words, lol. After being in the middle, where the ML quite acknowledge her existence, although not realizing it yet, he became a typical ML bully who's inlove...
i Will just say good job author keep it up
More shameless advertising. I really hope readers enjoy this story, it’s definitely not for the faint of heart.
yeah, I kinda enjoyed the story
is it harem? and is nyx in the harem?
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This is a typed MTL, with many flaws in the writing. It is a good story with a good flow, but the author typing from Google translate doesn’t know the sports slang and doesn’t know too much about English grammar.For example, there are times I question whether this is a basketball novel or a cultivation novel due to the character having so many breakthroughs. Isn’t he immortal by now?
Been a pleasure reading it, especially before AM I LEWD ENOUGH, I feel like the story was not completed before it was shut down! maybe so as to focus on the new light novel(AM I LEWD ENOUGH), who knows. Anyway it been fun AND succeeded to erect me! forgive me for saying that, but it needs some depth in order to do so to me, thus, it is a good one not going to lie ?
Very interesting Idea, but unfortunately poor execution. Short chapters and I read 25 chapters an nothing happened. Also the MC is very uncreative with his OP ability and that makes him look like a stupid person. So I cant read further if I dont like the MC like in this case.
Story has kept me gripped from the very start when lark awoke, or I should say evaders. Thanks for uploading it and I agree with the sentiments of the others, thanks again.
please this thing is ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
From the synopsis, it feels like the sentient magic one. That it had a sentient magic and depending on the magic mood, it will increase or decrease the advantage.. But we all know it will always go up.. So good luck, hope you get pick..
I'd like this to be picked so that I can read a few chapters and find out if this meets my expectations. This story seems very interesting and can possibly be a good read... or trash as has been the norm lately
one of the best novels i read so far, not only is the mc ruthless when he needs to be but also knows when to take a step back and HE ISN'T ARROGANT, can you believe that? give the novel a try, its truly truly a great work.
