At least if you want to understand what is going on read the first 5 chapters. It is also what is always done to give you an idea of the plot and to see if you like the initial idea. In my opinion I loved it, at one point I had a bittersweet taste but then came the understanding.Recommended 10 out of 10.For now I will try to get to the last chapter.
I only just started started started reading this today but it seems like something I can read and enjoy idk yet.
Great story so far, excited to see where it goes. It offers a fresher approach to a Naruto Fan-Fiction by taking place a bit disconnected from the main story in both location and age. Some critiques would be the flipping of gender pronouns for certain characters in the beginning which can be a bit disorientating and the pacing can seem a bit on the slower side without a sense of direction for a bit.Praises would be the focus on building the main characters emotions and fleshing out the supporting cast for him.Recommendations for the author would be to draw inspiration from the original source material through side-films and filler episodes, rereview some of the earlier chapter to correct grammar and pronoun mistakes.
it is pretty good and it saves time reading due to the symbol uses. i do see some grammar small errors but I'm sure it'll be fixed
Really good writing technique.But it took me like 50 yrs to get passed chapter 1 because your huge words "cacophony" and "onerous"So my only problem is huge grammar. some of us aren't walking vocabularies.Good job ?
The book has an interesting scenario narration. I acknowledge the author's talent as the work is really amazing. Sasha, being a unique character design, her dramatic nature brings a unique taste in the story
Oh would you look at that, you usual brain rot title, your usual horny mind cover page. What can you even expect on this site?...What's that? Wait, you mean this novel is good? Oh hell nah............is it?This novel is what I can only assume to be a continuation of OWE, the previous (incomplete) work by Mr. Stache. It follows our usual plot, you have the main character, annnnnnnnnnnd he's dead.Now's he's transmigrating? Oh wow, he's transmigrating into a nearly dead Villain in a novelesque scene. How Original!~Any moment now, we'll hit the regression button and go back to the ver--...Huh. No regression it seems. Instead, what is this, a Soap Opera? Ah... the characters are viewing the past thanks to some holy artifact, and they find out that the man that they put on death's door, the one who they thought of as the most villainous monster in history, he was in actually a soft man!? With a soft heart, that had no choice but to freeze under the assaults of the world. Wow, how sad...I can almost shed a tear...Tears for all the readers that dismiss this story as your usual webnovel bullshit. TL;DR: This novel is a gut-wrentcher that does not hold back on its punches when it slams the waterworks. Go read it, I'm not asking. Zi Long Ling Long Land Verisioness~~~Let's start with some concrete stuff before I start fan-boying. 1. Writing Quality: Top Notch. You hardly find any grammatical error, if any. Sentences? To the point, no BS mode. Obviously, it switches things up when expositions need to take center stage. To illustrate, long time webnovel readers of the modern day, the xianxia and system enthusiasts, the exposition sounds like a mirror. It's fun, humorous, and tries to give everything personality in a place where all you can find are edgelords who wish to see nothing but a similarly edgelord MC with a gazillion wives and strength that slaps people over and over again. It doesn't feel boring, but rather consistent. 8/10Update Schedule: Check the frequency of OWE's updates. You'd expect this new novel to be dead by now no? How surprising it must be, to find that the author hasn't missed a single fucking day since he first began?Let's hope he doesn't go on a long ass smoke break again. 10/10World Building: Take LoTM, but tone it down a few levels, and remove the 60 page exposition of how smooth and buttery the chicken peas are, or how juicy the pork is. Okay, maybe tone LoTM down a few more levels. Whatever it is, it's enough. The author expects you to go through the story and understand shit when needed, so he doesn't bore you with stuff. However, you can see that the world that they live in has history. Now how it develops in the future is not something I can say. For now, 6.3/10. Character Design: Take a character, introduce him/her to the main character, familiarize and build up rapport with the readers, and then kill them off. Textbook formula no?What's hard? Doing all this and executing in such a way that the death HITS.What's harder? Doing all THAT, in less than 90 chapters, TWICE, with a bunch of shit happening in the background. For those that we've gotten to properly experience, all I can say is that they are fleshed out as hell. But for the others who we haven't yet reached, they still live a lil 2D. And the crowd has personality, but not enough. For now, 6+Potential(10)/10Story Development: Twists here, twists there, plot points that make the author seem like a man with a plan (or a smartass, choose your fancysmansy), and wonderful execution to a point. Good shit. The characters act in a way that can be understood. As one 'I'm the second coming of Jesus' would say:Reasonable Development. 8.5/10 (high balling a teeny amount because of potential)..I started fanboying anyway. FUCK. Well, whatever. From what I've heard, the story won't be SS long, but more in the fields of 'it's enough.' Start reading, because no way in hell am I letting myself be the only one suffering due to cliffhangers. (binged the entire shit fortunately, and we're just now entering the new volume, so there's shit to be seen.)Overall rating: 4.6384/5. MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR--
I just finished reading Rebirth Of The Mighty Overlord, and it’s really nice. If you’re into epic fantasy, intense battles, and unexpected twists, you should definitely check it out!
Although I myself am not a fan of the reverse harem genre and also of its counterpart in the Male Leading stories, I would give this one a try, as I could already see there’s much to be anticipated from the story’s FL and MC’s development. This story looks more than promising, and I must say the author has greatly improved in this compared to her other works, where I have only read their stories halfway. Let’s see how our MC will fare in this dangerous world where she pits against werewolves and other human women as challenged to rise to the top.
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Keep it up. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait for the next chapter. ☺️ It's so engaging and I really love the plot twist within them lol ???
my big gripe with the story is that it feels like a series of notes, or like you're watching a movie and it's just characters standing in a room while the narrator tells you what *would* be happening if it was a movie. there's a big rule of "show don't tell" in fiction and it's usually to avoid situations like this, it feels very "heavy" on the mind to just read chapter after chapter of expository paragraphs about a bunch of background information especially when it doesn't mean anything to us yet. we were introduced to a family of dragons, their names, histories, size, powers, relationship dynamics etc then they just got thrown away because "no this new guy is the mc". we got introduced to a void in space with these realm trees, spread out across the sky and glowing, a big empty space as the location for the novel, then it got deleted because "no actually were going over here to this heaven place instead". then we had to go through the whole process of exposition dumps for the people who mattered again, it feels like a burger wrapped in 4 layers of packaging, inside a sealed bag, placed in a locked chest, hidden in a wardrobe. even if it's our favourite thing ever the price is too high. you have to study and study chapters and chapters of homework just to get into this novel and I genuinely had to put my tablet down a few times to give myself time to relax from it all.