I am giving you five stars!!! I really love this!!! The first part made me already fall in love. It is very well written and very interesting, you did a great job illustrating the scenes in the first chapter. It's proved to me that your writing is on the highest level. I salute you! And I never expect that there would be actions here, I thought this would be some mild adventure story about a doctor? OMG! I thought it was because the title and book cover is cute. Sorry about that, LOl! In any way, your skills in writing are very great and this story is the biggest proof. Adding this to my library!
It isn't bad, but the plot is too "slapface" if that makes sense to you. Haru just does things and they work out perfectly. What makes Reverend Insanity Reverend Insanity has been basically stripped away and Haru rules supreme in this weird reality. I didn't expect Gu Zhen Ren levels of writing, but this was kinds bad IMO. If you want to see a traditional cultivation MC slapface Fang Yuan, then you might like this story, but I ain't buying it.
Looks like this novel was booted off the trial list after being there for 1-2 weeks. Shame it was mediocre and it had a tree protagonist which is different and unique.
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Hello there! Author' here. Testing my new story. Hope you all like it. Furthermore, the cover was not mine. Thanks for spending your precious times. Feel free to stopping by. Oh by the way, english is my second language...sorry for the mistakes?
This is a slow paced novel, the writing is unique from other writers. The writer tries by all means to do away with those love story and fairytales.As much this is a creation some of the events are relatable. I would be so much happy to see this novel as a tv series[img=update]
author i hope you can finish this story .i am huge fan of world building and business management ❤️.
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Usually I don't review based on grammar. But this novel is literally a SCAM. Free chapters are translated quite well, but beyond paywall translation drops to MTL quality. Names change, descriptions of stuff change, Her/him is mixed up and overall just bad grammar.Story could decent if it went on as it was for first 40 chapters. I would give first 40 chapters maybe 3.5, not bad, not really super good, but enjoyable. But since translation turns into trash suddenly changing names and stuff, it's just unbearable to go on. And really worst of all you are supposed to pay for it.I just sincerely hope nobody pays for this if they wish to continue despite the bad translation, just look for other options.
Please let's support Fer Desz, I do like the way he mix different plots to bring out a flowing story.
The writing quality is superb, and the story development was really on point. The characters are very interesting. Although the world and premise were quite full of cliches, it's still a good work. Very recommended to new readers out there.
I hope that this story will be picked.