Damn it’s one fantastic novel. The story is actually good and has the potential to reach atleast 500 chapters without losing the topic. Most of the originals have good start but then there is no development there. This one is definitely different and deserves a way better rank than those stupid romance and naruto recreations. Author if you are reading this please don’t give up, you have the potential to be good Webnovel writer and hope you keep continuing your good work.
This novel is quite good but still need improvement.There is the writing skill and other matters that need improvement for the sake of the story. Beside, there's still a long journey for the success of the novel.
Man can you save his girlfriend in the next 20-40 chapters please it makes me feel really depressed for some reason and makes me cringe also i put 2 power stones
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Good so far but there's minus from me so not full five star since what I expect is that he only has normal system! nor overpowered like this one which could build stronghold in flash lol!So, 4.6 is good already! Don't expect too much haha! At least I'm not that meanie like 1-3 star army who attacking my novel! haha!~
The story started okay. It was nothing special but it was enjoyable . The problem is the last 20-30 chapters are unreable . Its random glibberish and i would bet its raw MTL. I dont mind paying but not for that garbage.
the pacing is kinda bad like i took 5to10chapters for like a week normally that's okay but the story felt supppeeeerrr slow like i felt i wasn't reading a novel but a 3hour guide to something but it only took like 5mins kinda got bored ??? but is a good story nonetheless
Gets boring in the late phase (~200 chapters) No proper fighting or cultivation just excavate world to make your own world that's the storyFull story relys on divine stone and coins tree ???????????????
I have already read like 300 mlt'ed chapters so here are some pros and cons of the novelCons:1. Extreme nationalism and racism to the point of being downright offensive even by xianxia standards. 2. every cliche you could possibly imagine3. Writing style is immature and some parts and situations i think is really just copied from other novels (Rebirth of the urban immortal)4. Villians are like totally idiotic like they would challange mc when they already know he is nearly invincible in same level by giving some insane logic like "I don't think he could fight 2 of us" and "OH! he defeated 2 but surely 3 is a limit" and "He is a monster to fight 3 we must eradicate him with 4 " and so onPros:1. MC is op and does not get thrashed by villains.2. power balancing is well done and you would not suddenly see a cultivator 2-3 levels above mc just showing out of nowhere.3. MC though idiotic like rest out there still holds on to a thread of logic. He does not just kill everyone and anyone4. No harem as of yet and mc does not chase after skirts All in all, I am still giving it a 3 star because as long as you don't mind the extreme and i mean "EXTREME" racism and typical cliches this novel is not that bad and have many good points.
Story is nice. Every bit of it is very good.update more frequently?????????????????????????????????????
This was slow and boring. 20 chapters in and they are still on the show.How do you have so much money and choose to live your life like you're poor? He literally gets a 9 to 5 job and only uses the money he earns from that job. He meets the girl of his dream, and I think they get married I don't know it's still not clear since she called him husband but every now and then they make it seem like they are not married.It's one thing to pretend to be poor to find a lover who loves you for you and not your money. And it's another thing to keep being poor making your lover suffer because you want to keep living the life of a poor man. And that's what this MC does. He knows his wife wishes her family would accept him but they don't because he is poor. Yet instead of fixing that he keeps doing what he is doing.I was wondering why this has such low ratings now I know.
The title says it all and I was attracted to it like a moth attracted to light. I wonder whether I'll get to get off 6 times though... Kekekekekeke