i have to wonder are you gonna have any of the cuthullu mythos in this story and if so which ones would you add but my personal opinion is that the cuthullu mythos gods are a helluva lot more powerful than warp gods but that's just my opinion
It's a beautiful story. At the beginning, I thought it was going to be a normal, boring story, but as it progressed, it became more interesting. Now I think it's one of the best stories I've read.
wow this is a talented writer.The story setup and plot is great I read chapter one thinking it will be about this family who moved and started a life got new friends.Thought it be like a typical love story.But then I paged and realized the title is exactly what it says it is Dark honor, Honouring loyality with distrust this is a great book!!!!!!!!!
Just 5 stars alone for that epic novel title."Reincarnated as a Bicycle"This is the true out-of-box thinking right here fellas!Update regularly and you can have my power stones :))
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There is no pacing at all in this novel. One minute we are in a scene, the next, it jumps 4 months later or a couple weeks later. It's just not good. Time jumps are all well and good if they are done right...this..this is not done right.
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3+2+3+3+2)/5=2.6looks like a lot of the 5 star reviews are paid for or y'all seriously read some extremely brain dead novels before coming here. this story really is not that great. it's less than average too. some parts of this novel assume you've read other novels first. sometimes that's cool, sometimes it makes this seem like it is of lower quality.the MC's behaviour so far is random. it doesn't seem to fit any archetypes and is all over the place. perhaps that's why the not much is said aside from he did a construction project then received memories. but this is not great at all
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Loving the story so far. I'm not really used to books like this, and it was a nice relief.The story line is really interesting, and I like where its headed.The author is doing a great job so far, can't wait to read more.