This is a good story. It was well written and I connected with John because the way you explained what he was doing and going through. This is definitely a good read if your into this genre! Keep up the good work!
hmm well this is fairly new story and there's not much juice in it but anyways heres what i think so far.1.The MC is original like he isnt the kind of guy thats too ideal or what most MC's usually are too matured for their age and all.2.And I personally like the meme references the author incorporates smoothly and subtly its hilarious and a new type of comedy i guessAnd please release ore chapters this story has great potential.P.S.- first review (SMUG FACE)
loving it the hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh goes crazy
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This is to be Taken with MAJOR SALT INTAKE which will mostlikely lead to a STROKE because of the stupid wish fulfilment of the Author-san.
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the gender has been confused a lot the master(girl) why is she called junior uncle?! i remember mc mentioning she has a valiant air but all other charecters talk to her like shes a man?
Another villian mc who tries to argue that they’re not a bad guy. The hypocrisy is just off putting. Otherwise it’s just kind of bland not really bad but not good either.
This novel is still still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.
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The novel is pretty decent, but I am not sure if the author has given up on it releasing. I need to know if I should just remove it from my library at this rate.
Interesting love it✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨