Very fun to read ,the humors are on point
A nice mix beetween The Lord's Empire and The World Online.I love it ! Need More Chap !!!!Need More Chap !!!!Need More Chap !!!!Need More Chap !!!!
This novel is simple garbage....i have never felt so frustrated reading a novel in my life...by the time you read up to chapter 12 you will understand ??i dropped it at 12
For a "modern" story, the world this takes place in is still future dystopian. The world building is somewhat there, but it seems that organized crime is the true government in all the cities. The focus on the MC has distracted from better character development of any of the peripheral characters leaving the story to feel unbalanced. This could get better over time. I've really enjoyed MVS and think it had better direction and focus from the start. This story needs more of both.
So far (40 chaps) its amazing..5 stars deserved..
In my opinion one of the best novels I've read on this site so far.
Writing quality: apart from some very rare and minor mistakes, the writing is great, especially considering English is not the author's first language
Story updates: very regular updates, generally with 2 chapters per day, but as a greedy reader it can never be enough :)
Story development:I find the story in general is very well planned out and with a good progression. Main character, while stronger than others at the same level, is not instantly OP. Kingdom building is also very nicely done in a believable way. Something I'm very happy about is also that the characters don't have 1000 skills which make everything really confusing like in other novels, making fight scenes much more engaging. The main reason I gave 4 instead of 5 stars is due to the somewhat slow pace more apparent during one ark of the story (Between chapters 200-400 if I remember correctly), manly due to "information dumps" placed often in the middle of conversations (need to say though that much of this information becomes relevant afterwards so it is indeed needed, and the story still remained very interesting). Fortunately after that the pace starts picking up and is very enjoyable afterwards, not too slow but also not chaotic.
Character design: characters are well designed and they act according to their personalities. There is also interesting character growth for some characters.
World background: also nicely done, with distinct regional powers and interactions between them. Looking forward to how the Black Plains start interacting with the rest of the world. As for other novels I would be very happy if a there was a map available.
In general I highly recommend this novel.
I recommend avoiding this one, as consistency is a problem. It starts out OK, with the MC teaching an elementary grade student. Even there the jump from where he goes to the bathroom and acquires his system, and then is suddenly able to answer the questions eloquently so that the student he is tutoring, basically is looking at him as if she is in love.He then realizes that his system can offer the opportunity to push the boundaries of human knowledge. He starts trying to answer random questions online and receives rewards that allows him to join a research project that has nothing to do with his studies. It turns into him face-slapping others that are participating in the research project.Over all a random bunch of garbage, with a system that is very poorly put together.
Very interesting start. Love MCs that aren't afraid to get their hands dirty and Vishnu certainly fits that ticket. I've only read the first few chapters, but so far the grammar is decent and it's easy to read, the small mistakes are few and far between, mostly consisting of miscapitalizations that in no way effect the reading experience. I'd be interested in finding out if their is any going back and forth between worlds. I look forward to reading more.
the story is definitely not the best, but it's good enough that it got me hooked. It have a good waifu, and you also want to know more about the world. so recommended.
I don't do this often, actually I never did this, but I'm going to write a second review. My previous review ended with me dropping the beginning of chap 49, and I feel I was being a bit too biased because that day wasn't that great for me, let me just jump in to he review. As of the beginning of chapter 49 up to chapter (??) I have started reading again and found the author does the slow pace of the story well, but interactions could be better (or I just have high standards), writing quality is reading so its a 5, SoU is a 5 b/c there are already chapters for me to read, story development, as I said feels slow, but I wasn't getting into this novel thinking it was going to be on par with my top novels, and even if not on par, story development is still really good so 5, and the slowness doesn't bother me at all, after I started reading again I felt that the character design started improving so good job for that author you get another 5, and world background, can't really make anything of it as of yet so still 3 star. I last review I felt was too harsh, this is the kind of review I would regularly give, keep doing good author.
Don’t read this novel, the author loves to advertise on other people’s works.
nice bookplease have stable updates.I feel there.. the book needs more characters to do good. hope you read it. ..........................