I’m at chapter 50, and for me, it was detailed, or should i say ’overly detailed’ to the point that even an unimportant scene could take up half a chapter or more… And because of how detailed it is, chapters are quite often being repeated from different perspective, or a particular topic for that matter. All in all, I liked details in my stories, since those small details can really bring a story to life, but this novel add it a little TOO MUCH it felt quite repetitive and VERY slow-paced.
This story starts out really great, but if you are here for the calm, lazy and fluffy (with delicious rice, tea and cute pet) ambiance (like I was), you will be in for disappointment. Having read ahead in the raws, the MC's personality starts to resemble that of Warlock of the Magic World more and more (so if you love the ruthless, no loose ends-no sympathy-no nonsense MC, this is it for you).
Great Work. It is quite humorous with a lot of action. The main character is quite clever and does things after careful consideration. His disciples also have a well defined character and do not appear as mere supporting roles. And the addition of the system makes the cultivation progress much more interesting.Overall it is a great novel and definitely worth your time ?.
I have to say this character a super childish that it comes off annoying and some of the sentences in this novel makes no sense like there's one line in chapter 8 I remember it was bright falling down or bright comes falling that didn't make sense, could have just said it's getting dark. besides that it's a lovely story it just the character give me a headache it makes me annoyed
It's just so freaking awesome like at first honesty we were a bit bored but later on with the story progress it became just so damn awesome I mean come on seriously Kyle is living a perfect life of a boy just love the sibling bonding specially dear author it's just awesome✔ New concept in reincarnation✔ Protagonist is awesome✔ Awesome world background ✔ Sincere Brotherhood✔ True sibling bonding ✔ Action Just awesome
It’s well written for the most part, but it still falls into the ever common trap of most modern setting Chinese novels; it’s racist, sexist, homophobic and transphobic. The premise is interesting at the beginning, but it just gets boring after a while, following the same plot line with small tweaks of *gain new knowledge* —> *come across wacky situations than can somehow be solved with it* —> *solve problem, but not without spending 10 chapters talking about how everyone underestimates him* and rinse and repeat. I read up to nearly chapter 500, and the quality just decreases. Even if all those things still don’t put you off, you still don’t need to read this, I’m sure you can find some other face slapping system novel to read, god knows there’s so f***ing many out there, some of which should probably be at least a bit less racist.
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It's an interesting story and the concept of being reborn in a fallen empire as a crown prince is intriguing.However the author failed to deliver the details and reality of various situations, or at least for me.People's reactions and actions, his behavior around his sisters and etc made it hard for me to continue reading this.
The author wasn't kidding when he suggested the first 21 chapters were something to grind your way through, I only barely managed to reach the halfway point of that benchmark and I feel like I'm about to go nuts with frustration. -The first thing you'll notice beyond a decent opening is how quickly the author is rushing to get to more "important" plot developments. He gets blackmailed through his deserter father and we can't even get a sentence of dialogue between them before he's carted off to another city. The dad risked a lot for his son and abandoning his responsibilities to the government aside, he didn't act like a bad father. Seems like they would have some emotional response to being parted, but nah, lets not include that. He loses an arm too and at least that one gets a sentence or two, unlike daddy dearest. Still, one measly paragraph to waking up with one of your arms just gone? I doubt he's so uninvested in his dominant hand that he wouldn't freak out or need a day to come to terms with his new life. Realistically, you'd need months and even years to get over it, but one paragraph later and he's mentally prepared to negotiate the terms of his blackmail (also something that happened INSTANTLY) and decide the path of the rest of his life.Then there's the ride to the new city itself, the landscape and the culture around them. Did any of that get mentioned? What about the after-effects of the attack or even the color of train he's sitting in? Well of course not! We skip straight to Godzilla rampaging through his home killing thousands to the hospital and his one paragraph of "where's my arm at?" then straight to blackmail and a train ride out. A one chapter wham-bam-thank-you-mam that shows the writer won't be asked to give detail to anything that'll slow him down on his checklist of plot points.-Then there are the conclusions these people jump to... It's honestly mind boggling at times. For example, some classmate gets told about his ability to manipulate different materials and when hearing that this power doesn't include liquid matter she goes "Well, people who control liquid are your weakness then"... Like no the fck it isn't, how does that make any sense? Someone else can do something you can't, whoopty doo! Are you going to fall to the ground and become useless because somebody can control water?.. No, the best counter to his ability was another character who can reverse effects, or roll back time in specific areas or whatever. She could literally undo everything he tries with his powers and still this classmate's logic is that liquid control counters him. Go figure. Anyway, this kind of logic isn't uncommon and is very noticeable to a reader for being just a little bit... off.-Another thing that became a problem real quick was the authors tendency to borrow lines or plot from whatever anime he's currently watching like One Punch, Full Metal and My Hero. The ripped Bakugo character is especially disgusting for how blatant he is. Same personality, same power, same rival dynamic with the mc. The other examples of it didn't bother me at all because although similar, they were distinct enough to be original. But I draw the line at a near copy paste of Bakugo's formula because of how ill-fitting the character was to be the mc's rival. We get promised an antihero and here we sat watching some Deku/Bakugo-esque development.-Anyway, to sum it all up this sht show is tied together with obvious plot devices, convenient storytelling and contrived plots. It's so rampant and disjointed I'd sound nuts trying to pick and choose examples, but you'll just have to take my word for it that if the writer wants something to happen he won't be discrete about it. This is the bedrock of what makes this story tick because it's the only way the writer seems to know how to move the plot forward. I refer back to his checklist of important plot events, everything is just another "tick" that needed to happen.-This story is frustrating to read and review lol. I seriously wasn't expecting such a poor experience when I started and in so few chapters as well. I read the author's joke 5 star review and I've got to ask that he stop. You've admitted there's a glaring issue with the first 21 chapters, you can't avoid fixing an issue you yourself realize when you're going around joking about having written "the best" story on this site. I'm not convinced your writing really improves at chapter 21 but if it does how can you stand letting thousands of readers drop off at a fixed point like this? The only thing a writer can ask is that we invest our time in their world, so don't ignore the hundreds of commenters I saw throughout each chapter frustrated with what the experience you gave them.-TL;DR - Highly overrated considerating how many poor quality chapters you have to grind through to reach the "good stuff".
PLEASE INCREASE THE CHAPTER RELEASE RATE,...............................................................................THIS NOVEL ALREADY HAS OVER 4400 CHAPTERS AND IS RAPIDLY APPROACHING 4500 CHAPTERS
Another super generic Wuxia novel. I'd rather read some of the novel without the super generic plots. Please let Qidian get some of the better novels out instead of the lacklustre ones. Thanks!
As the name suggests.. the book is about a cold and calclulative characters rise to power. While he doesn't go out of his way to commit evil.. he is known to be brutal towards anyone who tries to harm him.Its a refreshing character build that seems more in tune with reality. Highly recommend.