I cried at the end... I shed tears for 0007 and I don't know why, I feel pity for a completely non-fictional character.
Great book bro. I'm personally not a fan of romantic books, but this kept me intrigued. keep up the fire story
Great comic way to go and keep up the good work. I also i checked your Fandom. It definitely needs more work. glad you are writing and keep going
I see Dragon, I add to library. Being complex creatures and characters at that, it can be frustrating to write, this IK because I've come to love and even have them as my main characters. So I forsho know the Author will deliver ✨️.
i personally don't like it but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try it, I feel like everything felt a little too generic and it's really not just one thing, a lot of the decisions (pointed out in the paragraph comments by a few people) are just super generic and cliche, also the Ki/Mana in the world the author has made is called Ora and it just doesn't slide off the tongue well which was kinda awkward for me aswell. but it's pretty good you should check it out if you have spare timeps. I only got 10 or so chapters in and supposedly it gets better later so yeah you should probably read a bit longer than i did
I very much enjoyed the story and the pace though I feel like it could go faster in parts slower in other but overall a great piece so far keep up the good work
Impressed by the vivid descriptions, that makes you feel as if you belong in that world. The story captures you from the first chapter and that loss just makes the reader relates to what the MC will be experiencing throughout the story.Highly recommend it to the readers out there. Support our author for the great work.
the story is unique so far in a good way,
the story is unique so far in a good way,
the story is unique so far in a good way,
the story is unique so far in a good way,
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Good Novel yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
The pace of the story is good from what I've read so far. Some parts are kind of confusing but it'll be better once the author entered the editing phase. Characters are decently made too. Overall, this one has a lot of potential~
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