DanielKennedy8979
I LOVE THIS!! Suuuuper!! And I won’t say anything anymore cause its definitely one of my favorite of all time. Even if the lot of you would disagree with me
Really like the concept of exploring a new power level, as it adds more suspense and uncertainty as compared to a run of the mill power up story. Needs more chapters!
the plot and story line are great! this is another story i'll surely watch out for updates... ??
please continue this awesome book please
Very good novel (writing, uptade and story) and interesting concept, still don't understand why it isn't more popular.
Mc is not like other protagonist who start from bottom with good talent. Mc of this Novel has one of the Top family in his realm and Author has developed Mc character brilliantly
Hopefully the author doesn’t delete my review.SPOILERThe Mc was naive for a very long time.(100+ chapters)You can’t even give a proper excuse for that. He was almost killed more than the fingers on my hands, yet he still chose to trust people? He was told multiple times to not do so but he doesn’t listen. Then his friends try to kill him for the sake of their clans, and they think all is well? He’ll listen and forgive us? Like we didn’t try to kill him. The only question I have is “does he forgive them”. The plot was good at first but now it’s just not good. It was dragged out for way too long. Hopefully this novel gets a redo.
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The name of the story is really catchy. Your writing quality is good too. But the only problem I found is the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Maybe a little bit more information would attract more and more readers. Good luck!
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It has an interesting storyline. The plot was very intriguing. The story pulls the readers to read more of it. The story's progress was well-paced, and the placement was comprehensible. The characterization was also relatively good, but it gets shaky during conversations. However, the lack of details to descriptions was making it a little confusing at times. There are few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be revised and edited. Even if the story was successfully conveyed to the readers, I think that it would be best to work on those issues because I believe that this story has great potential and could be better.No offense meant to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!
I really liked it, I loved it, the story is very good and the plot is amazing, I really liked the character of the protagonist and how he adapts to improve, the novel or the beginning I found it interesting, I recom
