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So unoriginal. Such lazy writing they only changed minor details. Webnovel representatives please stop promoting trash. We are missing out on good novels.
i haven't even read it and i know it i will love it140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
first the story and synopsis doesn't match except the info about his perks and second it a same copy of a novel and manga called the legendary mechanic with changes in character names
Well it's kinda interesting.. nice job!I'll wait for more chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MoremoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMore
First: Good story, it is certainly interesting, and really great.Second: THE MAIN POINT - FIX YOUR GRAMMER PLEASE!!!Seriously, this book is amazing, and its story is currently rivaled by your terrible grammar in the first few chapters that I have read so far. I look forward to reading more, but please it is as though I am reading a puzzle in many points and cannot figure out what is going on.
More chapters!!! The character building is good and I love the concept on how you adapt the game setting into the timeline of the plot including the updates and patches of the real game
Im enjoying this book, its really great. there is stuff here and there that needs fixed, but overall the book is really nice progression vibe to it. I enjoy the video game world its in, the details of story etc. The conversations between chars needs to have a better devide, so it won't be that confusing to other people trying to read. also its nice to know what other ppl are thinking but at the same time its not that clear from paragraph to paragraph who is thinking what til your already read it, if that makes sense. but overall I love this book and want it to pass so I can read more of it.
Not sure if this novel has a future. The only thing that I can see happening is him being op and the other people exclaiming about it for 300+ chapters. Rinse and repeat. There is no substance here. Read Reincarnation of the Sword God if you want something with some substance. Translation quality is decent though.
read till chapter 130. can't stand it anymore. Trash after chapter 50. That's it for me and good bye.............................................
over 300 chapters in ww , for those who are still waiting for the update here i affirm you it will never be updated. this is a great novel. i love the MC of this novel I read this and Library of heavens path both are best for relieving stress .any one recommend some comedy novel like this two.
Read it on Comrademao and it's not that good to be honest, iit's just one of those 'popcorn' novel which focuses on trash lottery system after 100 chapters, MC can also pick bloodline but even though it could sstrengthen him by at lwast 1% he deems them too weak, at some point he find a bloodline at the level of his others bloodline but he forget about it even though he could have a huge backing with it. Ans in the end, even if he had a backing, it would be useless since even toward the middle/end(I stopped at around 360) MC is still at the noob realm even though he has the strength of a god anld could easily go to the Outer World to become stronger faster... There's also the deal with his pets which are totally forgotten after 10 chapters..
I do love what you have written............. ..............................................That is why I have thought of giving the 5 stars...................... I hope you will continue to write more novels...................... Thank you for sharing your ideas and also to enter you lovely,creative and imaginary mind through your words................
