SirBobthe1st
Congrats for winning prize in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)
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Im sorry but this story is just way to slow. Literally nothing happens and the pacing is off by a lot. It's not really filler but a lot of the chapters a filled with pointless stuff. I may sound harsh but I was expecting it to be slow but not this slow. I've read up to chapter 80 something and he has taught his disciple twice. I guess this is meant to be a chill novel but this is just boring. The writing quality is good tho and the world building is also good but slow.
I was not able to read more than 3 chapters. the grammar is very bad, you should find an editor now. you update fast but with such bad grammar it is not surprising that not many know this book.Other than that the idea is good.
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I do believe his cheat is too broken, I want to see the MC work to get results, their cheats may help them remove limiters on talents but I want to see them work hard for their power. A good first attempt with passion but I feel that it has fallen into the same pit hole you tried to avoid.
This has been a long time coming can't wait to see what Zent does with this novel after all ToS was great and with the year extra experience under his belt Zent will be able to do a lot better with this one. Still ToS is amazing as well. Anyway I know this is going to be a good one (that will also hurt my coin pouch)
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review in advance read bits of it in discord and enjoyed it, am i a bit biased? yes, yes i am 10/10 yadyadyadyadaydyadyadyadyydaydayyaydyadydyyadyadyaydayd
Just the type of story I like. I rarely like reading. Always perfered anime over books. But a good story is a good story. The progression is done very well. Not too fast just the way I like. Makes it feel earned. Drake is an excellent protagonist in my opinion. Humor is definitely top tier at times. The characters and how they interact are interesting. It just keeps getting better. Chapter 83 is what I'm up to. Definitely excited to see where this series goes.
great to see a friend creating a universe! I can't wait for the next chapters. I worked with him and never imagined that he would be a literary genius.
I haven't even started it yet and i already know it'll be a masterpiece. Can't expect any less from the author, i loved Profane Prince, I'm loving Fleshcrafting Necromancer, i'll love this one.
