the situation is totally repeating alice is probably going to adopt the child
One of the best books i have read in this Site. Had me reading non stop for hours and hours. Keep up the great work.?????????????
I enjoy this story and I would really give a 4.5 or higher rating if only the update was good. I have already waited 2 weeks or more for a new chapter but it hasn't arrived yet. So please let it update soon! I am desperate to know what happens next.
Only three this week?
This is my obligatory author review. I like my own story, hopefully you do, too.
This is so good but it is dropped? Why? TAT I really like the way the author describing the relationship. It is refreshing seeing both perspective from two people who are clearly into each others and know exactly what they wanted. Anyway, here is 5* from me.
If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.And if you don't mines go in my profile and click on the heart icon i'm gladly to do yours too
The story is good... I like how you write their emotions because you can see that... They are like true people...Keep up the good work!!!??
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I don't understand why you stopped writing, this story is good. The world seems very good ..........................................................................................................................................................
Well written, it has an interesting system based on biomass, almost like chrysalis but not exactly. I recomend this to anyone who has enjoyed the chysalis novel and wants something new and not the same evolution system as the humdreds on the web.The writing quality was not the most outstanding but still a 4 and a half star, it comes with the newer stories and should get better overtime. The best thing about the text was that it was able to draw me in with its descriptions and describe to me the exact scene.The updating schedual is also something that comes with newer novels, but if this novel picks up traction the author might make the novel a scedual. Please dont drop it.The story development was at times a little dull, like how the was almost no action with the parents of the mc, or the fast developement that skipped some parts of the story. Overall, another 4 and a half.Continued in the commets.
the author wrote Destiny forge... hmm i hope the he will write a complete novel this time.. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,..,,.,,.,,,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.