SuheilLakhani
Amazing!! The plot immediately catches you! And it makes you think what I would do in his place !! I loved it !! I already want to read the other chapters, please !!
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Unfortunately, a hypocritical hero with a weak character is just a cowardly monkey and tries to act kindly, in his dungeon he kills adventure teams who have family, sons, wives, husbands and family, but when he sees young children wanting to protect them something disgusting, you may have killed their family, you are a monster you must act like a monster No, just act like humans, they are more evil and deceitful than monsters, I don't know the hero is a killer, how does he try to show kindness, if you're a kind person, don't kill anyone, whether monsters or humans, what's the difference?!? And make your goal in life to raise homeless and needy children, help and protect them, and all the money you make try to spend on them, this is how you can be a nice person, and if you don't, this is hypocrisy, deception and personal disease, the important thing is good luck to the author, I do not like such a hero who thinks himself saint
i really liked tis novel olease dont drop and naybe upload more
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The story has some great potential to actually work, not gonna lie. The MC is understandable and is fleshed out and not rushed in any way.
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Everyone in this novel has brain damage, dont waste your time. Is an incoherente mess of a story where the most interesting thing happends when you stop reading it.
Review after the 45 free chapters - I am confused on how much I should tate this novel. While I found many parts of the novel cringeworthy, like mc being a simp in beginning, or every person in the city being stupid, just trying to humiliate mc and his wife, and mc getting massive powerups from the system within just days, these all things make the story cringey. Still there are some things I like in the novel, like the pacing is good, and writing quality of author is good, that he made me look forward to even such cringey story. Also, the romance is good, the heroines are not the conventional female archetypes, which I like. My only suggestion is - improve the pacing of story even more by making non necessary fights even shorter, like the fight with goblins.
This novel is honestly so uninspiring. A privileged and bratty young master getting even more privileged and bratty. This feels like a filler and nothing more than paraphrased Wikipedia. You can say it’s because he’s a kid but none of the other characters make sense in their decisions. A little 15 year old dealing in illegal merchandise and secretive business deals is purposely ignored by real adults, how realistic is that?
This novel was picked over My Cell Prison. The MC is retarded. There is no hope. I tried reading it further to see if there was a character development but nope. What a waste.
