Where the hell is the ending
Is this good?
Nah chapter I'm in 238 .. I can't take it anymore.. I'll delete this novel
Someone said MC is kind and r-slur. Have read all the chapters, and I don't think that's true, the kind part is to some extent but the r-slur part? not sure if the guy even read the same story I did. But ok
Author did a great job with the character presentations, giving an indepth details of their personality and emotions.
story line is slow paced and not rushed, giving readers time and details to understand what's going on in a chapter , good work!
i absolutely love reading this, so far everything is really unique and funny. I hope the write continues this and doesn't abandon this.[img=update]
gonna have to wait a few months because daily updates is just torture
some crazy amount of romance which I hope won't become too much.
I have read upto chapter 43 and I can confidently rate this high in most aspects except for world building. Specifically the cultivation aspect of it. Since the cultivation aspect wasn't built step by step but rather in an info dumping manner, I am as of now still unclear of what his entire plan is doing. If the cultivation knowledge was built up in a more reader friendly manner, I would've rated it higher. The story development is excellent so far and the world building is phenomenal as well. I only have a complaint about the cultivation aspect of it. Another thing I believe the author can work on is the descriptive aspect. Increasing your vocabulary and designing scenes that seem to literally suck the readers attention can do your story wonders.
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Translation trash .........................................................................................................................
I have read the book till chapter 40 and here is what i want to point out...... Many author's promise to give powerstone bonuses and dont! My respect to you author san for fullfilling the powerstone bonus promise on the same day as the target is reached every single week . The author actually listens to the readers comments and replies accordingly, even the plot takes a different turn if the viewers are not satisfied , listening to the audience is a big plus for me , as it makes me feel connected and valued ....... Giving a 200 coin gift to you for this ? Keep up the good work!