Lol, the premise is interesting, wonder what will she do later and what excuse will mc give? If only they could release some chapters to see whether it's worth reading or not.
I have yet to read this but I wanna support it :D So REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!
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Not many chapters yet so its an early review. Minor grammatical errors but nothing that makes the story unpleasant or unable to be fixed. Great start to the story and can't wait for more. So far this is one of my favorite reads on web novel.
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this won over lxy?this couldn't hold lxy's toilet paper. I get it, some people think IET is repetitive, he is not, y'all just wanna be hipsters about it and think IET is too popularbut seriously, this? this?
Extremely inconsistent pacing. There's absolutely no build up to events, no motivation explained, nor any indicative description - instead, this novel just skips through entire scenarios, somehow expecting the reader to connect the dots. If that wasn't enough, the story rapidly changes direction. One minute it's an empire destroying catastrophe, next minute the MC is in love with a women, and announcing to the world that she's his wife. Of course, if that wasn't enough there's suddenly a dozen chapters of MC and Natalie's love story. The author has a horrible tendency of wish-fulfillment, it's evident from how randomly the fe-tis-hes are thrown into the story. Completing ruining a prospective marvel. Sad.Comment might be deleted.
so here i am, dear fellow daosists.writing this review (after reading up to 2500 chapters of 2800 completed).what can i say... a lot of plotholes,,, some things went astray here and there... i had a great expactations of this novel but got nothing in the end.battles makes no sence at all, techniques are forgotten when they had to be used.he learnt a sword path (sword is everywhere) so he could create his own skills, and own "dao" to make swords be anything, and everywhere... (like turning the world around him into swords) he was going to work hard on this skill, then author just threw it aside like it`s something worthless... there is a lot if inconsistencies.one sided romance from his harem as he just said that he accepted their love, nothing more... (no romance in depth or anything like that, i`m not even talking that mc is runing away everytime they asking him to be close with them.)also mc character is changing, to the end of the novel he showed mercy to some enemy`s (who were a threat to the whole universe)(when our mc is a almost a damn guardian of this universe)a kinda interesting adventure expirience tho, no more.
Nice storyline and background☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺?☺??☺☺☺??☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺??☺?☺?☺?☺?☺??☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺??
Definitely amazing.After finishing here, I just had to go to continue reading the novel elsewhere, and I have to say its amazing. Currently I just finished the 3rd simulation, and compared to the 1st, the 2nd and 3rd are more in depth, but its also more saddening seeing the characters near MC dying one after another until he also dies, which doesn't really happen in the 1st simulation. I must thank the translator and I hope that you can continue to translate this novel because the difference between your translation and the other is definitely huge and I felt like I just missed a lot of enjoyment along the way there.
supporting the author with the ratings as the synopsis showcases everything I like in a mc. Hope the author writes this story to the end. This could very well be a hidden gem as the story progresses into 200+ chapters so stay strong and faithful author ?
When I picked this up on a whim, from the synopsis I thought this would be some game mechanic OP retardedness which would make me rage quit before I finished the first 5 chapters. I was totally wrong. First off the world building is left open ended since the MC is a student about to graduate. He doesn't have world experience to fall back on. But to the positive he realizes he doesn't and can look at situations without preconceptions? MC also does not have the stench of overwhelming cockiness which 97% of the MC's in your regular CN possess. Mysteries abound, hints and possibilities are foreshadowed in almost all the chapters. I enjoy a writer who can hint at and sketch in the scenery and characters layer by layer. All in all, a great start at 22 chapters. I hope it continues in this vein for many more.