LONGLIN
I have read the author's other novel, honoured one and I feel author is a very cultured human. Hope he continues to bless with us with his teachings .
It's been a while since i last wrote a review, but I just had to. This novel is a gem, I love the concept. I love the story the way it's explained, the fact that we get to explore with the mc. The only thing I don't like is the fact that mc doesn't really leave traces of his existence. At least for the legacies or the cultivation manuals he leaves, he should have let his name.
I read 200 chapters of this novel .. it’s just another trash Chinese novel ??
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It's pretty much a standard cultivation story with a lot of tech and scifi jargon to make it appear futuristic. For a webnovel, its decently written.The genetic system/chain is like acupoints and meridians. the country is your sect, contribution points are the same, instead of demonic cultivators, there are aliens. There are various interests groups and clans. It's not bad, as a futuristic cultivation novel.As for the nationalism/racism, if you are the type of reader who takes it personally, skip this. The U.S. and their EU lackeys have long been adversaries of China, and India and China have had territorial/border disputes for years.I'm not surprised a chinese author would develop a novel with antagonists that mirror real life. It gets to be over the top at points, but if you are able to gloss over that, this is a mildly entertaining story.
This story is somewhat of unique and interesting . Author should consider this story to continue .. Thanks for your hard work
I was expecting more character development before the protagonist’s easy win. The main character had no police/law enforcement/ forensic training before transmigrating with a detective system golden finger. In the first case, the golden finger replayed the whole murder before the protagonist put in any effort. Then, his boss agreed to arrest the suspect with out a warrant or any direct evidence in hand (Cultureal Differences?). I would have preferred if the system only told him that a murder occurred and then forced the protagonist to solve the rest himself. Bottom line the protagonist’s golden finger made him look cool to other characters but did not cause any personal growth.
this is a plagarised book. please don't give this guy money.he does not deserve to have this book on webnovel this is a terrible use of this sitr.
The story is more of a script, not that it's a bad thing. The story is actually pretty interesting so far for only being 4 chapters out.I love how it started with the other side characters views of the MC before diving in. It allows you to already see her personality before we actually meet her.I gave 4.8, only because the world background I understood was modernized, but it didn't go into depth much. Again, not that it's a bad thing, it allows reader to use their imagination.I look forward to reading more! Keep it up author!
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this is a good novel if it is maintained at this pace it will be great.please try it once. I love the mc's character most. .
Not cool author-kun pirating is bad.????????????????????????????????????????????????????
