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hey this can actually be a good book. go on writing it iam interested
Eey author! Stop using fake accounts to boost your popularity and stones to wpc top 1. Its been 7 hrs and you got 61 stones? Stop try faking it! Play fair and square!! If you delete this review, I will post again here and to the forum seeking help. You are denying the effort of various other authors out there . So man up!!!!
good potential to be a masterpiece.
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This book was very well written and very hard to put down. I couldn't wait for the next chapter to release. Finally Renee and Kevin have the true love and happiness that they always wanted with each other. I hope the author writes more books.
Not for me, the mc almost gets killed by his ‘older brother’ as a baby but dosent point it out and even blesses the guy to make him op and guess what the older brother still hates him and wants to kill him if he’s more talented than him. A lot of cliches like him being talentless, etc. are found. It’s just not for me, good luck tho!
this novel has really good world and character building, and the plot is also really good! the only problem is that the grammar is a bit messed up at parts but its understandable. really liking this so far, author seems to have an idea of what hes doing, im in boi. this junior brother hopes senior brother will take the trouble of coming along on this journey with him!
Incredible book, I could see that you already had in mind how to trace the story until you reach the current character of the mc. There were some points at the beginning of the story that bothered me, mainly the excessive naivety of the protagonist. But I hope you really don't let go your book halfway author, works like yours are really rare, with an intelligent villain and don't be cattle. I'll be following your work, good luck!Google translator
For the love of god why have so many percentages. It's in the face that it's a generic slap-in-the-face story. If people who enjoy this genre liked math, they would be attending college and not reading fiction online. The author needs to have some common sense.
My main problem with this novel is how the Author fills up the chapter with multiple of same system announcements instead of just putting something like x10. They will literally repeat it 2-4 times in the chapter thus wasting my coins or passes???.Also seems to have forgotten how the MCs skill works later on.I would truly rate this a 4 star if these weren't an issue.