Hello guys, author here. This is my second book, which I hope I will do better in. Even though this is my second book, I would still appreciate any feedbacks you may give about the book. goodbye, and enjoy the book!
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I'm loving the bookThey're twists and turns but they author is sure making us curious.
I'm really a fan of transmigration novels and this one is already one of my favorites.
it is best novel ,story development is best ,it will be best if you add Mc cultivation
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Grammar: Quite bad. For example the author forgot to n’t at the end of isn’t writing only is.Story: Not bad.MC: He saved a girl that was disappearing
It is not a marvel but it is entertaining, now I will talk about the things that I consider that I do not like about this novel ...The MC is kind of silly, although mostly it is from not having knowledge about something, even without that it is. I have read more than 140 chapters and so far he is very innocent, enemies have already appeared that could harm him and his loved ones if they were not strong enough and still strives to have mercy not to "kill". In chapter 138 they made a clone of him and he considered that it ruined the romance, because even if it is a clone of him, it is as if he was someone else and it bothers me, I do not know if the clone disappears or they destroy it quickly at some point, I I would like a lot...From the last thing I just said, I have to abandon it, if someone knows if the clone disappears in any chapter, they can tell me.
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The Book is consistent enough in grammar,(If you wouldn't take note about English depth) The pacing is great, The MC is quite humorous. The only thing I don't like is I find this book early where no little chapters just yet for now. So! BLUE BALLS!!
I'd actually only give this about 4.5 stars, if I was being honest about my opinion. I love the story so 5 stars is for this. The World Background is also good. Character Design isn't weak. The people rating the other characters as being flat and uninteresting have strange standards, where they must only like those characters that are OP like the MC.I happen to like the depictions of the other Characters. One flaw I'll nit-pick about is that the Synopsis says the Bird Clone is as big as a mountain. This is an unnecessary spoiler and not true for the chapters that were released.The people that rated this book without even reviewing it are missing a nice story and burying it to become a future hidden gem. I hope this gets picked up here. I'll spend some coins to read the better quality translation here. Cmrdmao (shortened so it doesn't get edited. Google it.) has over 2200 chapters, but they don't flow as well in English.