I just finished reading the entire story and I'm so sad rn coz I'm gonna miss all of'em and at the same time happy because all of them got what they deserve (bad/good). I also want a husband like Mo Ting in the future who'll dote on me, protect me and love me everyday (even though it's impossible) but it's not bad to dream right?.
Bitch! this is confusing!!! I thought the covenant was 3 YEARS!! and xiao budian was only 5 that time so calculating it, he should be 8! Even if he trained in the cosmic ray world, it should not affect his appearance and only affects his mind and soul. u confusing me shit
Aside from the racism and dumbness of Mc its pretty decent novel for passing time
That spider is male or female?? I'm so confused.Chapter 6
Hello guys, It's My Third Novel... or rather My First Novel's Rewritten version. So technically, logically, theoretically it's MY FIRST NOVEL!!
Give it a read.
There is nothing much to say other than this: NO NTR, NO YURI.
While the premise didn't seem like anything too out of the ordinary, the author's writing style and knack for building suspense made it feel fresh and unpredictable. Keep the chapters coming author
Added to collection as it is recommended by WN.
Love it just work on the translation a little better lol ??
my best Cultivation novel. wonder why the author isn't updating it on webnovel. this novel is an awesome novel, superb, great and wonderfuljust search for it online. And you are sure to be taken on a wonderful journey.❤️
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Man, I love this concept. An immortal practicing magic. So far, the writing is good and the way the author describe the scenery, the characters, and cultivation seems better to me than other novels I've read. But I feel a bit stiff when reading it, just a bit. It's like, it's too good that it's too bad? Or mechanical like the other guy said? In short, when reading this novel, I feel like something's missing. I just hope the novel gets better the later the chapters. Anyway, I'm definitely reading this one.
I had read it and its boring.its not about the translation being bad, but just over all bad.Its like a kid wrote this purely out of imagination.