look the book is great I'm just tired of authors having the character be a baby for the whole trial read there's no action I know the criticism but I like more action and at least a teenager character
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I really enjoy chapter eleven author please open chapter 12 I can't wait till I get another FP to read chapter 12 it's really good.On chapter 11 are they in Iraq or Syria?
bagus ide ceritanya, penasaran sama kisah nico selanjutnya, semangaaat thor melanjutkan ceritanyaaa ????????????????????
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While an intersting concept, but its poorly executed with too many cliches. The world is barely developed, characters and their backgrounds feels rushed and underdeveloped, especially the MC, who arrogant duche that just couldn’t grow too like, even a little bit. Along with that the system feels under utilized and badly explained.And overall the story feels to fast paced and plot driven for my taste.
Thought it was something, but was disappointing. Nothing interesting, even though i have only read a few chapters, it was disappointing enough.
An absolutely fantastic read, that always has me wishing that the fabled time for an update would come ever faster. A concept that utilizes your generic and common tropes in this style of a story and then takes it high heavens with its masterful story-telling. I wasn't much a fan of a first-person narration before. This, however, completely changed my outlook on things. The characters are well-written, the stories well fleshed out leaving me a happy and content reader. Well, shy of an even faster upload schedule but I guess perfection takes time to write, and I'm willing to wait. Definitely recommended! [img=recommend]
The story is quite interesting and I love it! This book has a lot of potential!
First of all Thank you author for the chapters. I know it's too early to write a review but the story is good to read. I like how our protagonist can become a lead character, villain etc. I hope that you don't drop this novel if the response is not good in the start. eagerly waiting for more chapters ??
I liked the idea of a modern Exorcist so I decided to give this Novel a try but it started going towards a downward spiral the ML is supposedly powerful but and strong bus has a weird submissivenes to her husband because if his yang energy which seems very forced and make the story loose its flow, then most of plot was just so annoying at some point because I could never understand why she was did somethings.I hardly comment on novels bit this is just so sad because I felt this had more potential.
The story is interesting, but it has several grammatical errors that make it annoying to read...............................................................