This actually has some real potential in it! I just love the way the author puts up a new mystery and holds up the attention of the readers. This novel also reveals the author's obsession with astral body, supernatural powers, mythology, and blood. There is a lucid yet ambiguous thrill in it (sounded like an English teacher ??). But at some point the lead character is always left in confusion and worse- helpless. Though this confusion and helplessness might push Kate psychologically to do something on her own and finally solve all the mysteries. Overall the story is nice… besides thrill and action, one would also get some slight horror in this. I would request some more mythological interference to spice up a bit. ❤️
story is entertaining and it seem like thus would be a good read.BUT this translation seriously hurts me so much, I really want to give it a chance but I seriously feel like this is worse than most MTL's
good to read. I give 5 stars, I want more chapters. good to read , 5 stars more chapters. reads Good, 5 stars more chapters. Good to read.. Remember I'm the God of war games I said it's good so it's good.
I haven't read much ngl, but in my opinion it's super captivating and enjoyable, I don't read much but I got recommended this book for my first book on Webnovel by a friend who reads a lot more than me, and I think it's great! There are a few grammar errors but I mean, I'm not surprised, I bet it would be the same for me. Anyways, i thought id leave a review cause i cant send any gifts, so just wanted to help!
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Seeing the upload schedule the author seems to have motivation issues, but nevertheless, the story is great and has tremendous potential. So, please......for the love of God, maintain a stable release schedule
Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain is a story about Chu Nan, a completely mediocre student who decided to become below-average due to useless pride/stubbornness. Luckily, God (the author) decided to save him by giving him an "advanced optical brain". This allows him to have very high calculative skills and a the ability to process this information extremely fast.
I think I am genuinely becoming sick of reading Chinese novels in general. It's very obvious that there is a very severe lack of talented authors that write xianxia/xuanhua.
Translation quality is mediocre. Theres many mistakes especially at the end of chapters. (3/5 stars)
Story development makes it very apparent that the author only wants word count, nothing else matters. This novel incorporates two of the most annoying writing "techniques" that you'll find in these novels. First, repeating the same information from a different point of view, often taking up an entire chapter. The second is how every time the main character does anything, we are forced to suffer and read some random reaction of some random irrelevant special-ed kid who exists solely to insult the main character. Aside from all that, this story is rather directionless. The only goal is for the main character to get to a higher-tier academy. What awful and cliche settings. We go from school arc to tournament arc to another school arc. Seriously?
Character design is awful as well. I feel like it's a waste to write another long-paragraph. We have the same cliche annoying characters as every other martial arts novel. (2/5 stars)
World background is also abysmal. In sixty chapters, I don't even think that the author has mentioned the main character's family aside from saying he comes from a family of farmers. Aside from that, barely anything has been properly described. We are suddenly in a school arc with the main character making many improvements, and then thrown into a drawn-out tournament arc. In sixty chapters, aside from introducing more useless and cliche characters, as well as providing a very superficial understanding of the world, we know next to nothing. Very poor attempt. (1/5 stars)
Overall, it's yet another novel where the author solely cares for word count. The only positives in this novel are solely coincidences that I doubt the author meant to happen in the first place. I give this novel 2.4 stars out of 5.
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I'm not happy that the author hasn't updated this book in a month. I was looking forward to it very much and now it's gonna bug me that I want be able to see how it ends
please Webnovel pick this, this is like a breath of fresh air from all the trash Webnovel have been releasing from the trial read. pick this
I got bored after the first 100 chapters or so. It was a good introduction to the story but it just got bogged in details.