Great novel
I am giving it review 5 because of female lead
Review written at chapter 70. The world so far has a lot of fun and unique traits that set it apart from similar settings. The story is developing well. The MC doesn’t squander their unique abilities. You’ll find plenty of books with some kind of, MC exclusive, stat building method. Some go too far and pump the MC too much, some don’t utilize it at all. The author strikes a good balance of power scaling, where mc doesn’t become unrealisticly OP. A little sidebar: l appreciate the little comedic undercuts to otherwise serious moments. I only put a 4 star on character design because of the girlfriend. I don’t dislike quick relationships per say, but it does leave something to be desired for a slower burning relationship. To reiterate, I do like the female lead. The world background sets up some good mysteries that don’t have to take the main focus of every arc. Speaking of arcs, I really hope the tournament arc doesn’t get too drawn out
I really loved reading the novel; even if I think the narrative is a bit too fast-paced for me and writing quality may need a little improvement, I'm not complaining since, in my opinion, it's still worth reading because of its capacity to keep the readers excited for the next event throughout the chapters and the characters chemistry.
I urge you to try it, its's my first time writing so I'm not sure if you'll like it. Even if you don't like it, please leave a review to let me know what I did wrong
Mamamia!!! .
Seen the security guard there. I greet the Securityman like a normal day. "Hi Securityman."
I saw Jennie pouting. After that, the four of us always eat together. We've been besfriends. Dahyun is really kind when you get to know her better. She's more beautiful too when she remove her eyeglass.
"...Three? My battle power augmented only of three!? After all that hard training!? God, why are you so unfair!"
Trying to shake that weird feeling away he looks back at the first task and even though he is shocked at the fact he is going to have to get the highest possible position a ghoul investigator could be, it is still mild compared to task 2 and 3 as he feels that he would naturally gain that rank after he accomplishes those 2 tasks.
Atticus turned the book over. "Something of Jem's. Called The Gray Ghost."
They enjoyed the incredible feast, and ate until the garden was almost bare. They partied and celebrated for their achievement of safely getting to the land of their dreams.