Nice story, i had high hopes for it but unfortunately certain points made me drop it, for a 600 year old guy the mc sure doesn’t act like it, aside from that there is aways the bemoaning of making a mistake and repeating them after a few chapters, and the forced plot, his relationship with the fox although something i could let it pass became abnormal and the events it led to ( around chapter 40+-) makes it seems like forced plot for character development or story progression
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Mandatory shameless author review here: It's a great story with a realistic approach to the cultivation world. There may be a bit of faceslapping, a bit of humor and a bit of crying, but all of it will be done in a way that's not ridiculously obvious and annoying! The overarching story has already been planned from start to end, but how events play out can be influenced by readers feedback so feel free to leave comments on chapters telling what you like or dislike. Either way, it's not a directionless novel going randomly from one arc to the next. Each arc is important, and seemingly mundane characters and events from random chapters may come back as larger twists later so keep an eye out and feel free to theorize how the characters will play an important role later :)
I am so in love with these characters. Rowan is soooooo likeable. I love how he is a mix of unsure and fiesty. It is so adorable when he and Wren get together. Talk about chemistry. Great job author making a believable romance that has both sexiness and substance. I will confess…I LOVE Lysander. I know he’s a secondary character, but I sweat everytime he is in a chapter. PLEASE give me more Lysander. I’d even read a whole story featuring him and Nicasi. Hint, hint.
reading this story was a whole roller coaster ride! The premise was very good and I already hate the tra- I mean, the king. Hope our mc will get his revenge, make the king suffer and torture him for his entire life. And I shall smile upon the king's death?
love the plot of the story...makes reading so exciting..
The concept of the story is cool and the exaggerations of the characters make it hilarious to watch. I totally love the funny dialogues and the way they are put.It is weird and yet nice to be in a game. I could visualise the apocalypse and all the things described in the book.I only wish that I hadn't felt overwhelmed by the sudden physical descriptions of the characters. Otherwise, the story is going great and has wonderful ideas to make it seem like the next Hunger Games.I wish you good luck, Author!
I'll try to be honest with you this novel has a big problem with the beginning you should make the main character have an accident with the VR helmet and because of the accident he became the barbarian otherwise it's just too much at the beginning of the novel. another thing that I think it's bad is the contrast between everyone in the barbarian powers because the way you explain the barbarian is like three four rounds stronger than everyone it's just too much you know and are the possible end of the novel he will be stronger too because the cultivation manual so he will always be invincible.
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it's really good so far I came here after reading the author's previous book(check it out that one was good ) , also author did the the mc's home world become something like players (or hunters) and rifts (dungeons) .and will there only be two worlds (home world , and the fantasy world) or many more
I read this one a few weeks ago but didn't leave a review. I just re-read it and still manages to make me smile. I'm looking forward for the next update.
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