One of the most well written LITRPGs among original works! Characters are fleshed out, and world building is steady. The MC is not much of a talker and he has the tendency to act first, think later, causing lots of hilarious situations to happen. Definitely worth a read!
This review is based until chapter 70.The story is really slow. the grammar is ok except the author doesn’t know how to use the correct pronoun. he keeps on using ‘they’ or ‘their’ when he’s only referring to a single person. this usually confuse me because i always thought that he was talking about a group of people. He also keeps on referring to other chars as noble this noble that, half elf this half elf that. It should be a name in order for us to remember who is who. for me there’s a lot of filler chapters in here. the mc seems to be like a minOr char here. tImothy seems to be the mc here. i dont know.
Writing quality not badStory is slow paced with little to to much scheming.World background unknown only that there's mages and humans and a capital city.The Mc's character is not bad we haven't got any glimpse of his rational behavior or coldness but he's a deep schemer too. 20 chapter of nothing but unrelated information that's even more confusing no action or magic or a single spell nothing just probabilities of solving a rubric cubes.It's not interesting there's nothing wow yet that'll keep readers wanting more.Ps his cheat look similar to LOHP.
it's disrespect to my intelligence for me to read this novel alright concept ruined by the writer.not worth reading it's time for webnovel to shut down
Extremely goodThose that prefer tribe online and other overpowered novels must read this superb novel at this moment it needs extreme support stabilizing it's release rate I request all to support this novel so that webnovel doesn't drop itI really want to continue reading this
Nerve-wracking. The descriptions contain enough information to create a complete picture. It feels so vivid to the point that not breathing seems natural.
The story is amazing. But Webnovel drops all good novels as usual. Reader’s choice is a joke when only trash with the lowest votes gets chosen.
The first few chapters are good and interesting. It is tagged as a level up but starts off as a story and not a video game straight into action which I enjoyed.
As an author i don't do self reviews. I did not do it even for my other top 10 novel , but i am going to have to do one for this. This is my dream project , I can confidently say it will be the best story you ever read. Soo here is what you can expect from this book : 1) No cheats , but OP MC through natural talent 2) Side characters that matter 3) A solid world building 4) No fillers 5) No cliche romance or brainless female characters. 6) A IMMERSIVE STORY If you guys have the patience to read this review and were looking for a good webnovel to read , then this is what you were looking for!
A little bit of yuri is fine, but holy heck is this excessive. MC is basically a 3rd wheel in this story and not really about him at all. Always feels like the girls completely just forget about him and he gets almost no character development. His entire 19 years of life on earth was thrown out the window wayyyy to easily. Sure I get he can grow out of it but in like 3 months?!? This story would be 1000% better if you only just turned the yuri down and it’s not always behind the MCs back (which does feel like he’s almost getting cheated on).
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Honestly, all I can say about this novel is that the MC is a complete and utter hyper-paranoid idiot. We're constantly told how awesome he is and that he pretty much reached the peak of the game in the past, but he hardly shows it in the novel. He's constantly making himself mediocre so that no one takes a closer look at him yet he doesn't care that the Blacksmith's Guild gets a look at his 1st class and will send it to headquarters? Very inconsistent. He also reacts like a newbie to everything for the sake of the reader and it gets old fast. Also, I get that this is meant to be a VRMMO where the players develop the world, but it feels like all the NPCs have been whacked with the idiot stick a few hundred times. The system also makes virtually no sense in my opinion. It seems like the author ran with the first cool idea he had in his head and didn't bother to think of any of the implications. Only reason the review score isn't lower is because I never reached the current chapter so I have no opinion on the update stability. Honestly, I don't usually read VRMMO novels because I think they usually would suck as games and think they would be better served as isekai/regular LitRPG and this novel did nothing to dissuade me from this dislike. If anyone reading this novel wants to read a story where the MC goes back to the beginning and exploits it for all it's worth in an actual good way, read Night Ranger instead of this.