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Keep up for the updates bro! I'm want to see the prologue end, and entering the main story. I have a little advice, pay more attention to the correct use of punctuation in dialogue, especially the use of (,). Anyway goodstory!!
This story is an unpolished gem with incredible potential. The concept is captivating, and the characters are truly unique. I can easily see this novel becoming a top bestseller in the future. However, there are a few areas the author should refine to fully realize its potential. Despite that, I highly recommend everyone give this a read!
i would recommend everyone to read it.after reading half of the book. i can say it’s good.
Good job please read my book and add to collection let's support each other ??????
Each chapter is very captivating leading you to next, the Author is really doing an amazing work with this novel, I so much enjoyed my read till this chapter.Well done
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I would not lie, I really love this book. I have always been picky with the type of books I read but this is truly great and even the grammar is outstanding ??. I really appreciate the writer. keep up the good work ???.
Hi dear readers, author here. I have waited a little while until I made my own review. I tried writing another modern novel with some angst and heart breaks. I am planning to make this story short but full of roller coaster of emotions.I hope you will like this. Have a good time reading.
Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC
Found this on a whim, but absolutely worth it. Very good find Mr. Author where I understand the reincarnation trope is pretty common nowadays with the whole isekai thing going on, but this one is proving to be SO MUCH MORE in this story where we have the MC (Ren) who is doing his best from what I can see taking back his existence to become the best he can be in with his new family.
So far the story has a good start, something in it just wants you to keep going to know what happens next , it's a very engaging and nice story ,good job
