It's great series I love it
41 chapters 6-28-23
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Dark. Dirty. suspense. death.
The novel provided a generally enjoyable reading experience, with well-developed world-building and relatable characters. The MC's unique ability to equip skill orbs was an interesting concept, but it served mainly as an explanation and didn't dominate the plot after a certain point.
However, there were a few aspects that detracted from the story. Firstly, the MC often found themselves thrust into new situations due to external forces, lacking agency, which made for a somewhat predictable narrative progression. Secondly, the MC's party consistently spared "bad" individuals, even if it led to immediate complications, which became repetitive and occasionally frustrating, as most "villains" turned out to be misunderstood or had valid reasons for their actions.
Lastly, the romance subplot left me unimpressed. Despite the harem genre and multiple potential love interests, the MC chose to pursue a childhood sweetheart who was just ten years old at the time of their initial meeting. Their relationship progressed at an unrealistic pace, with long gaps between visits and a four-year separation before marriage. It seemed implausible and not a healthy foundation for a romantic storyline.
In summary, while the novel had its strengths, these shortcomings hindered the overall enjoyment for me.
This is an exceptional novel, one of the best I've had the pleasure of reading. The plot moves at a perfect pace, seamlessly alternating between the main character's (MC) "death bar" missions and the love interest's (ML) intrigue-filled plotline. The MC's storyline is more intricate than initially described, filled with creativity. As the story progresses, the emotional depth increases, and towards the climax, I found myself crying continuously, even though it's a heartwarming, rather than tragic, tale.
The relationship between the MC and ML is adorable, with the MC taking on a caring, doting role early on. Their bond only grows sweeter once they become a couple. What sets this apart is how ML respects and supports MC's aspirations, like helping him pursue a police career despite his association with the triad.
Both characters undergo significant character development, facing their flaws and working to improve themselves. The MC's growth is particularly evident as he works to clear his "death bar." ML, too, experiences transformation from a depressed state to determination to live, and his character arc is subtle yet impactful.
While some might argue that MC's character isn't entirely realistic for a cop, I find his optimism appealing, given his background as a small-town policeman with a stable life. His occasional naivete, especially around ML, could be attributed to his trust in the system and ML.
The supporting characters, including the brothers, also grow and add warmth to the story. The triad members may not be as fleshed out, but they prove their loyalty to ML as the story unfolds.
The author's writing is witty, with humor贯穿 the narrative, even during intense moments. The balance of humor, action, and introspection makes for a compelling read. I'm thrilled to see this gem translated, and I appreciate the translator's efforts, especially with the tricky MC's name!
In summary, this novel is a delightful blend of emotions, relationships, character growth, and humor. It's a must-read for fans of well-crafted stories. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and translation!
No, but he begins taking care of his subordinates
Can anyone please tell me what is up with this LN, is it dropped or something
For a romantic storyline, this narrative doesn't excel. It leans more towards an adventure plot. Personally, I'm not particularly fond of it, but I also don't厌恶它。Ning Shu is a thoughtful character with a strong moral compass, applying logic and empathy when it counts. She isn't merciless, but报复和自卫是她的底线。然而，她行事过于鲁莽，倾向于直接解决问题，这有时导致她忽视了一些细节。她的智慧不算差，但偶尔缺乏常识。幸运的是，她的运气不错。关于她的过往背景，虽然没有详细的描述，但从零碎的信息中，我们知道她可能与某个异世界组织有关。在那里，她的生活似乎同样波折。我对故事的走向充满好奇，但我敢肯定，这绝不会是一部纯粹的爱情小说。
Nah it's alright mate. We all have our own preferences. transmigration novels tend to portray a hero mc or an anti hero mc which is quite unrealistic. I mean if someone has the knowledge or knows the future of a world chances of him being evil is way lot more than good. Anyways before I get side tracked maybe that's the reason why it was only about the mc since the readers might feel bad about certain characters if they get more screen time. We don't need to know more about them when they are only gonna suffer at the hands of the mc. I think it was a smart idea.
Any mobile city builder aka any clash of clans like game. (Don't play them though)
Try it. It was actually pretty good.
bro, do you understand the race of this novel like the Orc's? if you don't mind can you explain it to me. plssss