I personally found this to be a really good book
The chapters are in the process of being a edited by an editor so the mistakes in the first chapter's should soon disappear and make the book more readable. This will also be the reason for when you will be seeing a lot of coments at the end of chapter but a little to no paragraph comments since the whole chapter is being replace by a new one in its place causing the paragraph comments to dissapear.Thanks.
I really liked this book when it first came out till no more chapters came out!! I dont get y u would start to write then stop!! I was looking forward to more chapters but I guess its not going to happen!!
its very nice but it can be longer chapters, i love the character developments and you did a good job at stability of updates though i just read i know they will be more good luck
It is a good novel. Don't get me wrong. It has good writing quality and adequate world development . But what ticks me off is its ridiculous slow pace development of the MC. MC is very weak at the start. He takes an oath that he would be stronger than everyone so that he could protect his loved ones. But sadly, the MC does very little to get stronger. I have read a lot of chapters and the MC is still a one star mage. The concept of system is very poorly used for the MC's growth. I know the MC is young as compared to his ridiculously overpowered harem members. But at this pace , MC is gonna need atleast 2000 chapters of story development to atleast come close to his harem members powers let alone his enemies . when I read the description of the novel, I thought MC would go to great lengths to increase his power quickly rather than fooling around with his woman who are marginally stronger than him. I am not blaming the author or novel per se. But this is not my type of novel.
This story is an unpolished GEM!!!The grammar at first is terrible, but it gets better. The story is genius and the action nonstop- very descriptive battles. sometimes even too much (3chpt battles.)but yet very satisfying. This Brilliant concept and story are worth the time. I can keep this in my libraries.
Esta es la primera vez que hago esto, pero quiero decir, lean eso wevones aunque no sea la original conecta a saitama muy bien one piece, y la escritura de maravilla, como la pija no resivio mas actualizaciones, puede poner el titulo del fanfics en google y le aparecera mas capitulos
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did they abandon this novel already? :c T_T..............................................................................................................
Nice theme, interesting Mc, refreshin change from the typical fantasy vrmmo . Excited to see this play out!!……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
"NO HAREM TAG" = RARE, AMAZING, EXCEPTIONAL NOVEL PLOT WITHOUT BRAIN DEAD AND USELESS A.K.A GOOD FOR NOTHING WOMAN IN MC'S LIFE.HOOOORAAAAAAYY!!!
No dont drop it, I dont care how the novel is, the mc has the same name as I have, please dont drop it, I want to read it Come backCome back