I am truly amazed by what I read and I am glad that I got to read it. The story isn't that complicated like other VR related stories that just drives you crazy with all the terminology.I really liked how Xiu step by step became strong, conquered her fears and walked onto the path of changing her own fate.I will be looking forward to more and sincerely hopes that her path will be smooth even though that is impossible.Rooting for more and keep up the good work, author.
I had binge read this novel used mtl and yeah it's got me hooked.. Can't wait it got translated and quick release please......?????????????
Alekzi asked me to leave a review as a fellow author and as the editor of this novel, and I will be as truthful as possible.I wanted to read this, as I am a friend to Alekzi, but I couldn't bring myself to do it at first because as an English native, it was difficult for me to deal with the sentence structure. After some chit-chatting, we came to an agreement that I would help him bring the writing up to snuff.It will take a while, but I'll be doing it as fast as I can for his future readers! Daily released chapters will be edited before posting, and I will tackle the former chapters as I can (:As for the story itself, I regret not reading this sooner! Even if there are issues with the grammar, Alekzi has had experience from writing many books before this, and he has truly mastered the art of captivation!The plot of the novel up to current is well thought out, the outline of current and future novel events is meticulously drawn out, and 'almost' every chapter has just enough entertainment to keep you hooked!Isaac is an intelligent (Not a super genius) character who almost completely lacks prior experience in MMO or VRMMO settings. He doesn't just automatically start as the best in the world as is seen in so many other VRMMO novels, and is actually somewhat outclassed in the earlier chapters. As White Online isn't set up like any VRMMO that was released previously in this world, his intelligence and lack of video game experience actually assist him in climbing his way up the ranks from the bottom of the barrell! I have enjoyed my read, and I hope that my work in raising the quality of this novel helps many others enjoy their read as well!
I encountered this story in wattpad today while looking for stories to read and when I read the 11 chapters available there I looked for a different app with more chapter and found it in webnovel. I really love the story. It's very interesting.
1.It is quite unbelievable plot that the big families have send their future heads/candidates in such dangerous forest without proper training. Also why are they giving guards! not only these guards are useless can't do their job, they can't even procure food.Even the suppose useless mc is more knowledgeable than them,so they also can't be proper guide. So to me the whole plot is very forced & weakly knitted. 2.Now for the mc. -A ULTIMATE SIMP-Through the whole novel he is simping over beauties.And he is so intelligent that he charges 'magically enhanced delicious food' for 3 silver, when other sells 'normal bland chicken drumsticks' for 10 silver. 3.Moreover it is also kinda 'Sign in' type novel. As we don't clearly understand how he is leveling up(I am talking about the new recipe getting not the system update with gold). Also a gourmet system where u don't even have to cook doesn't go well with me.
was well write and thought out for the most part. I just wish some parts had more detail. example the skip of five years. wish there was a little more there like did they every get married or when did they complete the mating. also wish who was talking was put at the beginning of all chapter some didn't and I got confused
A good unique setting and theme of cultivation type novel one can ever hope to see, glad that I'm reading it, hoping to have a great time reading it. It's great till now and hope the same for the further chapters.
Hello readers, being my first book, the beginning chapters might have many issues including grammar errors.. Under development...I'll try to make the story interesting to mske up for this issue... Please bear with it
Same template as Astral Pet Store, but i feel its a hurried version. The pets are not the main focus since theres so little part they played for the MC.The world power level is not empathize since the MC just brushed past the ranks. And theres so little restriction placed on the OP side characters that the MC were never put in real danger since he has OP bodyguards accompanying his every adventure.
Had an alright start, but But quickly becomes worse he then has a pet that’s a female girl who is only six Dont recommendSjdjxjd dixnend
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ahmm can you update some ireally like your story ?