GajinSnail
Я искренне не понимаю, почему такое хорошее произведение не имеет достаточно читателей, учитывая тот факт, что написана эта книга довольно таки хорошо.
So far so good, I’m enjoying it and looking forward to how the MC progresses to become the Big Baddie. Hopefully there are twists and turns along the way!
A really nice story, its got a good flow to it, the chapters (I think) are the idea length for reading and I really like the plot, too! I think some chapters are a bit dialogue heavy, which isn't always a bad thing, I just would like to see a bit more description amongst it to break up the text a bit more. Overall, really enjoy it! There is some good humour, and I am really looking forward to seeing how it progresses!
plz update more chapter......................... nn
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Will update as I read more. Currently has a logo of potential and hope to continue to enjoy this read. Again will update with more information as I read
I love the premise of this story and the writing style. The author is doing an amazing job with expressing both emotional and physical going-ons .Five star to take the drive far!
Translation is so bad, it's unreadable. I tried to persevere because I loved Warlock of the Magus World (by the same author) so much, but I just can't
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??
Dropping translation quality down. Continuously repeated phrases and scenes throughout the story almost word for word. The translator is also super ungrateful. Update stability is also dropping down because of the premium. Chapters have slowed down tremendously in preparation for releasing multiple premium chapters at once, to reduce the amount of free chapters for the week on top of making it premium. Story development is almost non existent, he's always the strongest, and he chases a woman through half the current novel. Character design is a joke, cultivators are introduced as "experts" and women are introduced as "supreme beauties" and sometimes never actually given names. Characters fade into the background frequently, especially if you're friends with the MC. World building again is a joke, somehow even when you're going to different worlds the author managed to keep it dry. Describing the "immortal realms" has "impossibly vast" doesn't actually tell anybody anything. This novel is mediocre at best, possibly worth the read, definitely not worth premium though.
This actually is pretty horrible. I think most people probably had some idea of it, and were completely surprised when they began to read it. This is a modern day, Chinese male in America, bug-centric story that definitely does not utilize political correctness at times, and is pretty dull and annoying. Some people obviously like it, but it results in either an "I hate it" or "I love it" feeling. You'll find out within the first few chapters
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