Comedic plot with surprisingly two peculiar yet similar MCs. Unlike other novels, this one presents the MCs with the most insignificant, meaningless, yet mind-blowing deaths that one may even need to hit a jackpot for. Regardless, I look forward to future chapters and grasp a full picture of the identities of the two MCs.Best, Dr. Jelly(definitely not forced to write)
This is the best novel for you if you want to lose some extra btain cells you have. This is a journey of nonsense and bull***t at their finest.Disclaimer: if you only have few braincells please don't read this novel or deadly damage can be done to your brain
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I tried really hard to like this but I just can't. I'm very confused and nothing makes sense. The family interaction is weird. The MC has constant mood swings of being angry and then guilty for no reason whatsoever. Does he like them or dislike them ? Do they like him or dislike him? We never find out. Then he goes to the academy without knowing anything and just shows off everywhere, casually insults teachers and casually harasses women that always like it.Also this guy defeated a dragon, supposedly the strongest kind of creature in the world after about a day of being there. Is he invincible now? If dragons are that weak then why are they a threat? Are teachers stronger than him, cause he doesn't seem worried at all even in the middle of enemy territory.Sorry for the bad review but I really don't get it.
It's nice. I don't know much about horror, but the setup made by the author was cool and you could read the emotions of the character through the events.
ooooh I love this novel!!, my first time reading something like this. it inspired me in many ways, even though it's fiction. I want to Know what happen next. You Have my full supports. I Purple You.!!!
I'd probably give my own story here 3.7-4-ish stars, writing quality has a few past/present tense mistakes, some writing errors and confusing sentences, and overly repeated words, but is mostly clear and 'enjoyable' to read. I think I did an okay job on the action, but I don't have enough experience with that to tell.There will only be one chapter for this. So obviously 5-stars.I only gave myself 3 stars for story development, as it's too short a story to really test any natural/interesting developments, developed as expected, maybe did an above-average job explaining things.I personally found the characters fun, and was somehow able to give them slightly different personalities in such a short story, nothing too multilayered. Can't really brag, but I think I made some fun, fairly well-written characters.I had lots of details fleshed out for the plot, world, city names, history, blah blah that didn't really fit in. Given how short the story is, I'm not going to be too harsh on myself over not being super detailed. Though I will say I should've described the fauna/landscape of the area and at least attempted to depict the alien world outside of a single building.Thanks for reading my review of my own story, now take off your pants and I'll give you a cookie.
A somewhat dull read. There's a chance that this novel might have an overarching plot or story but for now the first 19 chapters are vague descriptions of the power system, more specifically the sword qi in the protagonist. Every sword is just a qi producing machine? What does the sword qi do? Is it just a consumable that maybe tempers him every now and then? How does he fair against a cultivator? What's he going to do with the ridiculous (and growing) amount of cultivation techniques in his head?This is entire novel feels like I'm reading an uninteresting storylike infodump. Good translation quality but I can't be bothered. 2.5/5.
The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this. Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site.The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something.This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.
by reading the synopsis I thought this is gonna be interesting (I don't know though if I understood the synopsis correct ??). I started reading it and I cannot understand the thing with the "-" you put all the time,got time to explain this?
I like how the author makes use of perfect imagery to describe the scenes and views of the places. The MC is a broken hero who dreams of nothing but revenge. Fun part is he has an Elden God, Margoth, inside him, who stays inside him like a parasite and appears sometimes whenever he wishes to absorb some souls. On his journey the mc finds a girl, I'm so excited about how this turns into something cute and romantic. This book has so much potential and I would like to read more. Hope the author post the new chapters soon