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keeps getting better the more i read, i dont even know how it is possible to get better, the only thing a cant keep wainting is when liu mei turns 16 and watch the ring with the nightgown xuefeng bought her and see if she keeps what she said years ago: I will keep it for my birthday's night. If you don't come, I will ascend, find you there and show you… You won't be able to reject me again after seeing me in it…
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I think this is being written by a horny 14 year old... Cringed so hard at the description of a vagina as a "wet cave" that i had to quit this novel!
This is a good story. I didn't often read novels about apocalypse but this one is interesting and so is the main character and how will he save his planet. It only needs proofreading in some chapters then it will turn to a more improved version of the story. This is still new and I think the author will still improve with this one. Good luck author!
For the first hundred chapters or so, it’s a pretty typical ‘Pet Store’ novel. Typical ‘tragic’ back story, typical ‘hard working’ protag, typical little sister. Only missing fat best friend. The world building is fairly spotty. It is a bit excessively described which isn’t too much of an issue if the author didn’t constant retcon himself. Make things to ‘extremely rare’ then everyone has it/knows about. Make some skills ‘extremely hard’, then bam no one is surprised by anyone who can do it. For example, MC’s profession is supposed to be stupidly rare and hard to do. Only reason he’s good at it is because of his cheat and he has absolutely no foundation. Like an award winning inventor who dropped out of primary school and barely understands science. MC does the equivalent of memorising some books and suddenly he’s an expert at the job and no one is even suspicious? For a profession where people seem to be in triple digits in an entire ‘federation’ (or so the author makes you think at the beginning. Will soon realise that’s more bullshit)?The actual world building feels like the author can’t decide between having a society in the Information Age or one set in fantasy. It’s some weird combination of the two that really doesn’t make sense.There is whole list of normal cliches and plot holes I won’t go in to, but at least the book was entertaining for what I came for - pet evolution + business.****** ****** ****** ******Then I got past around 130 chapters. Hooo Boy. Hooooooo Boy.Everything positive from the start of the book? Gone. Relationships? Pretty much ignored. World building? Jesus... In one of the later chapters, the author mentioned the words ‘Acid Corrosion Queen Bee’ 33 times. 33 TIMES ONLY IN THE BOTTOM HALF. At least if it was a Wikipedia of Feys I might find some interesting information. But no, it was the same information packaged and reworded multiple times. Then this same information is repeated to me Ad Nauseam in later chapters as well. This happens so many times I lost count. Then there was an entire chapter telling me stuff about a taxi bird fey. An entire chapter describing it. Again absolutely nothing interesting. No David Attenborough with his dulcet tones to do a voiceover. Drier than tumbleweed and even less useful.He even has a ‘Master’ now. I don’t even get the point. Sure she gives some stuff, but there’s no teaching. No guiding. No tasks. But can’t forget to insert obligatory young master while MC hides his background.If the book was around 3.5 in the first 100, it it’s easily tanked to a 1 now. The info dumping and repititiveness is absolutely atrocious. Never mind the fact the MC has pretty much become a combat guy now. Never mind that so called ‘support professions’ are still judged by combat. Never mind the confusing evolution mechanisms that seem to change every few chapters. Ugh. Just another disappointing Chinese pseudo-Pokemon knockoff (fake pokeballs from a mega corporation included).
The abstract is amazing, not too much revealing about the plot, after reading all the 15 chapters, i can feel like this novel as the potential. words are common not too difficult to read, which is the best thing because other reader who are not fluent in english can also enjoy the novel. keep it up author and make sure to upload 1 or 2 chapters daily.
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