Omg these bit sized updates are killing me! Don’t get me wrong, I’m super grateful to the translators…it’s just that I am really enjoying this story so the partial chapter updates drive me crazy
Waiting for story update .it has a cool MC. Role more characters in the upcoming chapters. Need improvement in cultivation ralated information
I liked the story so much I went to patreon and am now in book 2. Awesome work!
Very immersive writing, really interesting characters, can’t wait to go on this journey with them?
It needs work but I can tell the author is passionate and likes to write. I can appreciate the effort and am willing to respect the dedication to writing something of this length. There’s a lot of room for change and improvement.
Sobresaliente! Nawa'y ipagpatuloy pa ang sulating ito, tunay kong ikinagalak nang simulan kong basahin. Mabuhay ka, kaibigan!Ang bayan kong Pilipinas, lupain ng ginto't bulaklak. Pag-ibig na sa kanyang palad, nag-alay ng ganda't dilag.
noice man not my cup of tea but the writing and everything there in top notch man keep doing what your doing man , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Locked after 8 chapters.
Good Writing Style ?Good Story Development So Far ☺️Specifically Detailed Information ?Character View Thoughts ?Early Understandable Overpowered Protagonist ?
if the roles were reversed this novel would have never gone out.The mc is a beta who got raped by some cultivator who used some forbidden technique to forcefully take away his yang energy which wuold have normally crippled him (it won't matter since it says he has a system) then gone away and came later (after 4 years) because she got pregnant (4 daughters), all of this while talking to him like he is trash.Now he takes all this as if nothing and is fine with it. All in all a beta.P.S. before she cripples him he saved her life
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