Honestly I was hoping this would be a good read and it seemed like it was off to a good start but way to many errors and POV changes at the drop of a hat with no indication of the change. By about Ch 20 I found it al but unreadable.
It'll be bs if the government really protected someone just because they're very rich just to offend the "greatest genius
This romance novel fell flat for me on multiple levels. The characters lacked depth and development, making it difficult to connect with their supposed journey of love. The plot felt contrived and preThis romance novel fell flat for me on multiple levels. The characters lacked depth and development, making it difficult to connect with their supposed journey of love. The plot felt contrived and pre
Writing and English both barely understandable, but the concept seems nice. I'd like to see the author try again after improving their skills. Don’t give up!
The book is worth it, the story has the potential I hope the story won't end soon. looking forward for more chapters, I'll never gonna drop this story and will read it till the end.
love the characters personalities and the storyline
MC is just a beta male who thinks with his lower half. Indecisive . Aversive to killing . ?
if you are willing to upload frequently I will be your strong supporter author ?
Well well ...! It was actually very interesting! I'm not really used to reading Litrpg but the Diablo-like tower ... I'm sold (as a gamer, that spoke to me)! The writing is concise, precise and suits very well to the universe. I truly recommend to people to give it a try! I have to add one thing: author, you have the reverse problem of me. Sometimes, you cut the sentences too much where it should be a comma instead of a point. I think some sentences will be more impactful or meaningful.I'll keep it in my library and will definitively continue reading it! PS: I'm so sorry, I add so many comments while reading as I was reacting just in the hot of the moment :joy:
its good and so very good but still the updates is still slow and please dont be over powered characters or otherwise the story will become so boring
really good but you should move it over to the fanfiction section instead of novel
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