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Haven’t read yet, but because of the consistent uploads I know this is and will be a banger. Reviewing to support it! Added to my library!
This is a very unique system novel with it's own pace, love the description of the characters tho the dialogue felt kind of stiff in the earlier chapters it gets better! Keep going author everyone needs to read this
what happened to you bro? ? why no update? did something bad happened?
I noticed that this novel began to be read by more people, so I suppose a shameless review from your favorite author should be necessary to give you a brief introduction about this novel!
The MC is reincarnated as a ice dragon after dying in avalanche and getting wishes out of his last desires, kind of like a certain Slime out there!
In this novel you will see him survive, discover his powers and also the amazing norse mythology-inspired world of Yggdrasil!
I can promise you that you will not get a stupid mc, this one will be toughtful with his actions if possible, but that doesnt mean that there wont be a lot of monsters and even evil cultivators that desire to use him as cultivation materials in the future!
But things wont end on this, as this world is undergoing a mass reincarnation of otherworldly souls by a mysterious entity!
Each reincarnator will be filled with cheats, bringing chaos everywhere! Will our MC be able to fight against these insane freaks?!
Well, go read to find out!
The premise is great. The whole idea of a boy opposing heaven and stealing from it is also quite fun. The problem lies in its execution. The grammar and flow are all over the place with little to no flow. It makes reading a struggle completely pulling you out of the novel's world and stopping you from getting immersed. Flow is unfortunately a concept in writing that takes time to perfect even for native English speakers so it is just something that the author requires more practise at.
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We need more chapters p/w, only 1 chap per week ain’t enough
This novel is just at the beginning of its story but its quite good i do recommend it dsgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I could only read up to chapter 6. The author did Netorare without warning. The girl has no reason to even do this. LOL...........................................................................................................................
I've finished all 40 chapters and it's a good novel don't get me wrong at all but there is a ton of translation errors to the point sometimes I can't understand who's who not any world development for God sake earth is called blue planet and we learn nothing about his past life either kinda kills the story but if the translation errors were fixed I think this would be at least a 4.3
