Unique and nicely blended. There was a point in the story that 2 characters went different paths but in almost every chapter, the author covers both of them. Well done.Story is still young at chapter 100+ and I foresee countless seasons to come.
This novel is so good. I feel sad for August, it's almost as if he died for nothing. I hope everything becomes okay for him. Looking forward to more chaps ?
Trash fic trash system very keng die below average MC who needs to put in exponentially more effort to get similar gains as others Pathetic attempts at humour
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Fake reviews by evil immortal makes this pop up at 5 stars when this novel isnt 1 star for you until you learn to lose the fake and the story aint even that good so much bs
I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue ??????
Good article, it teaches well about writing in Web novel, this helped me a lot to become a writer so I give it a hige five. I vividly recommend this book since it's informative and important, the writer did a very good job
I like how you insert information and short comments there author. At first I was overwhelm reading the first chapter. Slightly confused because I can't get the grasp of what's going on. But amazed how you can describe the movements and techniques your characters did in the story. Instead of reading, it feels like I'm watching a fight in a crowd with commentators describing every techniques the fighters did. It's super cool. I'm still reading at the beginning chapter, and I'm looking forward of your book. Keep up the good work author!
This story though my first story in this site is worth reading. Likes how the author portrays her characters, and the way the story flows . I will just say that it is a book worth giving a chance and I promise you won't be disappointed.
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all I have to say is that this MC is literally to worst MC I have ever read about, he literally ticks off all the boxes I hate about different MCs all in one horrible package, other then that thou the novel could have a lot of potential but its impossible to read cause of the shitty MC