The only thing lacking is stability of updates. Of course I understand that good stories need time yet I will give 4.8....................................
Great Story. Characters were real and came to life. And I’ll bet a million bucks you would nevEr guess the eNding. If You d….Youre a genuus
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go:Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department.Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here.Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here).Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future.World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.
for translator note. male - he, hisfemale- she, herwhy the translator keep changing the gender of the mc. whyshould just stick using he, him only.
This web novel is great. I rarely write reviews because of my bad English but I want to write a review of this novel. 1. Writing Quality - Writing Quality is Good there are some mistakes and it too improves as story progress. But the main problem lies in understanding who said what. I mean, for example, there is "I know it's you who did this"written But no explanation said this you need to guess who said that but thankfully this rarely happens and you can read this without spoiling your reading experience.2. Character Development - Character development is one of the main points for me in reading this novel and writing this review. Both ML and FL personalities develop as the story progresses. Anna grows from a narcissistic, Self Center, arrogant, Selfish young master type person to a kindhearted person who helps others Although change is this big it's not forced and understandable. There too are some problems like Anna acting childish even though she is returne and Noel's hate seems somewhat fake and forced but overall it's great. 3. Update stability - Too good to be true.4. Characteristics - Noel - Kindhearted but if you give him the option to choose between his life or an innocent person's life he definitely chooses himself, Smart person, perfect for an ML. Anna - A little dumb and childish but perfect for FL.
Some chapters after the 40th suddenly the quality of the translation goes down like crazy. If there is one sentence where the gender is used correctly you feel lucky.It is not just he/she, someone is suddenly even an "it". This is a new low.
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nice novel....and you're a man of culture as wellthe progression is a lil bit slow but its fine..but all in all you did a good writing this novel...FLOORGANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is it just me, or does no one else see a synopsis?
Sorry, not my type of novel. I thought there will be a few face slaps and comedy in this novel. But nothing there is to make me laugh or smile.Well, but it had unique theme but no excitement or mystery anything here. So i will be dropping this novel at chapter 30, maybe i will pick this novel againIn this novel mc had unique character development and nice cheats