Perfection to its finest would t want to change it in any way a five for perfecr story and a 6 for the rest
This is a simple but refreshing story. I love the daily life description in this novel, so realistic and easy to imagine. The characters are strong and well-designed. The pace is just right. Everything is good here [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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hello guys this is my second review ;)first of all this is my first novel. so don't be disappointed in first few chapters, its getting better and better, as a reader I can tell that too. and i want to tell some things before you guys start reading. 1, MC Du Chan is an dropped out, gangster, and a otaku in his past life on earth, he is a bit childish in the starting chapters because he is in kids body! a 8 years old kid is not an adult! even with his past memories! but everything will change after some chapters. but he is selfish, and evil type MC, you can call it Anti Hero!2, Storyits strong plot and good i guess 3, HaremYes, its harem! but there are no dumb FL's, MC loves his harem more then anything! but he had no weakness to women! he would kill women too! 4, Grammarmy grammar is kinda not bad, you will understand whats happening and whats going on, but it will cause problem to some readers. 5, Updates yes, daily updates! thats enough i think, Thanks for reading this review! please try to read this novel too, Thanks in advance! ;) This novel is not bad!
This book was truly amazing despite having only 2 chapters. The writing was so friendly that I could not help but say hi over and over again. I truly wish to see more chapters of this book.
I would give this a power stone if I could, but I used up all of mine! As the comments below have said, this is a great story, and I think it deserves a chance from yall!
This was nice i enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue writing novels to improve your skills and express your imagination. Thanks for the wonderful novel.
why did you change the story I liked the slime one???......................................................................... ...........
A good novel with solid beginning. I find the pace is slightly fast compared to the other novel but it's good! There's really not much to see as the story itself is only at chapter five but considering the good beginning I can't help but want to read more!You won't regret it if you are a football fans and love to see the rise of a football club from a lower division to the prem!
My friends if you want a good novel and a great writer just read this novel and help him. I have the feeling he will be better and this novel is just a start but it feels like he has already skipped a few steps (in a good way)This novel is great with great imagination and care, you can feel the warmth in every word and feel his hard work.Bro keep it up, I am a fan of your novel.Keep getting better and God will bless you with good luck.
I can only give it 2.2 stars for the reason i list next. I am 100% sure that this story is a highly gutted and edited version of "Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System" " 神级系统万界大店长 "