please update it (2023-02-24)
So frustrating that you aren’t updating your books anymore what a waste of time and money.
Amazing story and i love it please no more unlock.
when are you going to update author
I love reading books like this. Keep it up.
It's only been a few chapters, but the story got me hooked up. Good work author, waiting for the next chapter!...
gutter behaviors everywhere! gush I hate Axel
love love love
I want to discuss how this section handles its pacing because honestly, the author made a really bold structural choice here and it mostly pays off. The chapter opens with what could have been a throwaway comedic scene—Wen Chu people-watching at a cafe—and then pivots into the WeChat Moments confrontation, which is where the romantic tension actually lives. This is smart because it gives us three distinct beats: observation (detached, comedic), confrontation (tense, intimate), and resolution (the finger interlacing, the post, the notification bells). Each beat escalates the emotional stakes while the external action stays relatively contained. They're in a car. That's it. But the tension is suffocating. Then—and this is where I want to highlight the structural pivot—the scene cuts to the next day and we're at a family dinner. This could have felt jarring. A romantic comedy beat followed immediately by family drama could have thrown off the reader's emotional register. But the author handles it by keeping the same emotional temperature. Wen Chu is still performing. She's still calculating. She's just performing for a different audience now. The family dinner itself is paced with remarkable restraint. Pei Jianguo announces the remarriage, Lin Xiuyun breaks down, Wen Chu responds with genuine warmth—and that's it. No dramatic confrontation, no hidden secrets revealed, no plot twist. Just a quiet moment where Wen Chu realizes she actually means what she says. 'She wasn't the original Wen Chu. She didn't harbor that frantic fear of being abandoned or replaced. On the contrary, she was happy for Lin Xiuyun.' This is the kind of beat that doesn't scream for attention but absolutely anchors everything that's come before it. What I found most effective about the pacing is how the author uses silence. Xi Liye doesn't respond to Qin Yu's messages for a beat. Wen Chu doesn't know how to respond when he asks 'what kind of photo should I take?' The family dinner is quiet until Pei Jianguo speaks. These silences create space for the reader to feel the weight of what's unsaid, which is where the real story lives. If I had one critique, it's that the transition from the car scene to the dinner scene feels slightly abrupt. A single line break and we're at a different restaurant with different characters. I would have liked a tiny bridge—maybe Wen Chu's internal reaction to posting that photo, or a moment of her actually processing what just happened. But that's a minor note in an otherwise well-paced section.
I absolutely love this story from the cliffhangers, to the bantering, & surprise/complicated relationships the characters have! As always looking forward to more updates!
23 chapters 9/6/23
When are you going start the part 2?