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Like where we are going. Romance is also developing alright! Action is okay! Adventures are brewing nicely. Just work on the grammar man!
Story is good so far. It looks like mix of mmrpg and system. Have to see how it progresses.I like the system oriented novels like dragon system, reincarnated as ice dragon with system, reincarnated with strongest system They were fun so checked with this.
So I just recently caught up and the book is good with some flaws but they get fixed. The main issue is the fact on chapter 424 the story is completed which doesn’t make much sense. I’m about 40 chapters away from where it “ends” and it just getting started in a lot of ways. It’s no where near the end so I assume it got canceled.Unless it continues don’t bother reading it.
FL's character is quite weak . It will be enjoyable if she gets strong .
"Oh you laugh at me?" asked Nurseman--Pfft ... It's sound ridicoulus, Nurseman ... LOL.
God put it there, which shows, God has covered our ugliness with holiness.
yes I had watched rwby in my past life lets just say that this world is different in simple terms more mean and hard
he knows how ruthless Sophie is..
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"Well, you and uh…you know." He began quietly, flinching at his continuous stutter, "She uh…she still has-"