Hello, Secret_Ethereal here,A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.
great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it ?
Angel with a harem is dumber than a single mother with 10 kids.
well I was just browsing and find this master piece. Story is interesting and well story writing is also good. Well hope author will try to keep the story as interesting as it is.
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Though early to review, the stage for novel is set. It has a big background and if this novel goes on it will even go to intergalactic war. MC and FL are eternal lovers hated by the god realm as FL belongs to devil realm. MC went through 9 rebirths so that they can be free from god realm and start new. Now they are together. Apart from two very few characters are shown. MC and FL belong to dragon family abandoned in some world coz enemies were gonna kill them. An old man adopted them when he found the newborns alone in a hut. We have 2 other children that are royalty and finally a dragon god who messed up a lot in past. MC and FL have good personality matching their past. Currently they are 5 yrs old. A lot of details about past wars are mentioned which led the world as of we know. If the novel continues this is gonna have one epic action with good wars. I guess MC and FL gonna fight against the god realm for all they suffered and meanwhile people might not stomach them coz of their talents. Plus other galaxies might attack again the god realm.So I suggest people to give it a go. All details will be explained again in future if it looks complicated to people according to author.... Keep going author.
Good writing quality and stuff but it feels rushed and the author doesn’t seem where the story is going it goes from apocalyptic world into sudden mythology based modern earth with little to no explanation
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The story is really Great! The develoment of characters is good to….BUT WHY DID THE WRITHER DROP THIS GEM????????? THE LAST RELASE CHAPTEF WAS MOR THAN A YEAR AGO????? Can we at leAst hear from u And tell us if u drop it or not please?!?!?
I dont know what should i write, but this is so cool ?, cant believe find GuP fanmade in here! But, your grammar and word choice makes ur writing quality just 3 stars. So far is so good. always learn grammar to be better! Thats all, keep it up
The words were kind of poetic. Each phrase represented the time and situation the characters were in and the use of the language was kind and mellow to the mind. It was very interesting, I look forward to more chapters in the future.
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