The story starts off slowly and can be monotonous, but it gradually becomes more engaging around the 20-chapter mark. There are amusing moments that elicit chuckles. Despite being categorized as a 'fake and true child' genre, the storytelling is relaxed, allowing me to accept the diverse characters. While the supporting cast may not exhibit the most logical behavior, the author effectively conveys their thought processes, whether through emotions or environmental influences.
The side characters often exhibit envy towards the protagonists, but these feelings are portrayed realistically – shallow and short-lived. They either fade away or become occupied with other matters, reducing their impact on the plot. The novel avoids typical jealous vendettas that escalate into violence, which I appreciate.
I also appreciate the realistic portrayal of relationships. Characters who develop affections for the protagonist due to their beauty eventually realize that marriage isn't solely about status, and they opt for genuine connections instead. This adds depth to the narrative.
Regarding the 'fake-real son' subplot, the author handles it with care. Though it doesn't have a clear resolution, the complexity and emotional turmoil faced by the characters are well-rendered. The grandmother's choice is a tough one, emphasizing the impossibility of a harmonious coexistence between the two children.
The main love interest, the Other Male Lead (O!ML), initially comes across as spoiled and hypocritical but evolves over time. His reliance on his mother's affection creates an internal struggle, which ultimately leads to growth and self-reliance. Although his character arc is not the main focus, it adds an interesting dimension.
In conclusion, the story has its flaws but overall, it's a decent read. The antagonist faces consequences, and the innocent are protected. The O!ML's future is left open-ended, but it's satisfying to see him become independent. The main character and his mother's journey towards reconciliation takes time, but it's a meaningful development.
Lastly, it's amusing how the Jiang family, known for lacking literary talent, ends up marrying into artistic professions: the eldest brother marries a pianist, the second brother a novelist, the third sister an actor turned music teacher, and our protagonist with someone involved in makeup and fashion. This unexpected twist adds a touch of humor to the story.
I initially wanted to give it a chance, but unfortunately, it falls quite short. The writing lacks polish – the narrative is冗长 yet lacks substance. The story feels stagnant, even in its slice-of-life attempt. The majority of the content is background, with minor details拖累着 the plot with lengthy backstory that doesn't significantly contribute to the main story.
The lack of character development is disheartening; emotions are superficial, and the author appears to be mimicking the conventions of a light novel without establishing a genuine foundation. It reads shallow and monotonous, akin to enduring a slow, tedious experience. I'll skip discussing the unsettling aspects, as there are other works with similar themes that I enjoyed more, but it's the execution that turned me off.
As for the translation, while there aren't major issues, numerous minor errors accumulate, creating an irritating reading experience. Inconsistent verb tenses, jumbled word order, and confusing sentences compound the already mediocre narrative. The translator's attempt at witty chapter titles comes across as forced and grating, especially when they all end with ellipses. It would be better to retain the original, unexciting titles.
I understand my harsh critique may seem unnecessary given my clear dissatisfaction, but I don't harbor hatred. The potential of the concept is evident, but it seems the author and translator deliberately chose to undermine it. My disappointment stems from their missed opportunities. Despite my grievances, I acknowledge their efforts. In essence, this story could have been enjoyable if not for the unfortunate alignment of my personal dislikes in light novel creation and translation.
I really enjoyed the initial concept, but the main character's predatory and invasive behavior completely turned me off. It seems from the comments that this disturbing behavior won't change for at least a hundred chapters, which is disappointing. Although I do like the protagonist, in these kinds of narratives, I fear the author might overshadow him with the main love interest. It's frustrating how the main love interest always has to be the stronger one, even though the protagonist's growth is important too.
"Apocalypse: System of Lotteries" is a riveting narrative that captivates with its unique blend of dystopian themes and high-stakes lottery system. The author weaves a compelling tale where chance and fate intertwine, leaving readers on the edge of their seats. The characters' desperation and resilience are palpable, creating a thought-provoking exploration of morality and survival. While the premise might be unsettling, it's the unexpected twists that keep you hooked until the very end. A thrilling read that challenges societal norms and leaves a lasting impression.
say something Im giving up on you
I time traveled
Read Star Rank Hunter. The same author with this one and in my opinion, his best work
wait, how is the ending bad? i need to know if it is still worth reading or not. I hate bad endings with a passion.
If you're fine with bl and weird plot, sure why not. But if you're sensitive to *nc*st, better not cause even though they are NOT real brothers, the way the author wrote the story makes it look like the other characters dont mind their love relationship (MC and ML).
TAKE NOTE: only the ML and the mc later after some chapters, know that they are not related, meaning others dont mind if its *nc*st☠️
Status: C163This apocalypse type story is more serious than most, and contains lots of gore and other ugly stuff. Be sure not to read it when ur eating.If ur OK with that, I recommend this novel.
... do you know about The calamity that befell our civilization thousand of hours ago known as " THE REGRESSION"? It could be a result of that
Retarded comedy. Not recommended for those who still want to keep their brain cells.