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I was interested in the time loop type of story. I also want to know what could be at the end. I really like the pacing over the story and that the setting is in Germany. I like the way its paced and how the paragraphs are spaced. Its very easy to read and comfortable to read.
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I landed here through recommendation and the story seemed good.Though it would be a lot better if the author will going to update it soon.The idea is fresh and I hope that to see more of a romantic comedy in this story
okay the main character's name I couldn't actually read that much kept changing every other paragraph between Jake and Leon. the HP made no sense he had zero for a couple system updates for a while and then had 10 out of 100. the exercise routine made zero sense but that wasn't the main issue at one point at the beginning he ran 5 mi in 3 hours that is so slow. I just the random writing errors were driving me nuts. admittedly it's not awful story there's some stuff that just doesn't make sense and add up well but it's not bad I'm just very frustrated.
A unique dark novel with reverse plot which system destroy and supress mc. Very enjoyable : )
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A good story, but poorly written. It's a very good re-run of a xuanhuan template story, with several of the go-to camp moves that come with the genre but with a few unexpected twists and twerks. Because of that, the world background fall to several tendencies that are natural with that kind of story but unnatural in its essence, such as the clearly demarcaded separation between states that stood for millennia but always crumble just as the MC aproaches, with no real reason for it except plot-armor.That said, it still is a nice story and any difficulties that may arise because of the broken english are forgiven because of its qualities.
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This novel is great, Overall the novel was great, I recommend reading this if you have time, For translators and author, Please continue the hard work.May the god bless you.
ima give you a 5 star because 1 ima piece of **** 2 im retarded and 3 im stupid.... and btw i didnt read your novel yet but whatever, if other people can give a review without any common sense or moral attitude then why cant i XD im so excited to get fk by someone who is ofc better than me at all aspects of life =3
Nice.Good story.The 1st chapter have some errors.Do your best and thanks for the story.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????