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A good Novel. I loved it. Not boring, New plots and its amazing.
Currently in chapter 311...I just wanted to say WTF HAPPENED?! WHY?! JUST WHY?! WHY KEVIN?! AND NOT REN?! WHY IS THE BOOK THERE AND NOT WITH REN? HUH?! ANSWER ME?! IM FUMING MAD! NOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO REN?! HUH?! WHAT IF KEVIN SUDDENLY CHANGE THE COURSE OF THE EVENT?! HUH?!
Lot of continuity errors in this zhang yi sister doesn’t exist his pet cats got yeeted half the numbers detailing things are just wrong but i still think it’s decent nothing to write home about though
Truly one of a kind book where Cultivation meet with magic power system. I am currently at chapter 55. Will definitely come back here when the chapters piled up. Like 100ish maybe? Anyway, it's a solid cultivation book, filled with treacherous journey, heart-wrenching plot wist, charavcter development is solid and not rushed.
I have just started but so far so good, I am seeing some good developments. The pace you are going is great. No unnecessary writings just to fill up space. Your characters are also simple and easy to relate. It's great you are going down this path but be sure to make the Harem big and overpowered.
This is an excellent piece of work with distinctive characters, clear background.
The way how the writer described everything from characters, and environments to actions and emotions makes the story feels real.
The paragraph arrangement is very neat and easy to understand.
Overall, it's good.
I don’t care what anyone says this book is amazing and I need more please give me more
Woah,, are you writing again??? Or... Is it just my wishful thinking ??, anyways, I am happy that I found this novel, I don't know why,, but I really really like this novel...
I don’t really have much to say about it. One of the best novels I’ve read in a while. The protagonist is absolutely amazing. No romance as well which is great.
love this by the way author I want the book picture of this book, I really like it can you like upload it? ....,
Epic, just epic! I can't say anything else without spoiling things. Another awesome novel in the HideousGrain Multiverse! I swear I think it's his best work to date!
it was good at the beginning, his abilities, his progress, productivity, it was good, however ruined by revealing things to his parents.I also hate the fact that he waste his potential for the sake of being a Hero, for the better of the world, stupid pathetic childish naïve thinking
