The writing isn't the best, but I'm enjoying it so far.Not to mention that so far the frequency of releases has been constant and the author himself left in the synopsis that he has more than 200 chapters written, I hope it's true and if it is, we won't have the danger of leaving the story so soon like many others stories out there.I think the only thing I didn't like is about their wishes and as the system is not being explored much, I hope that will change in the future.
Very very Dog-**** start the earlier chapters just plainly showed the author just put what he wanted and it was very inconsistent as well, character building yes there is, character design? My answer to that is negative, I mean why design a bloody ass S-ranked reincarnator when his experiences are just plain ****, can't be used. I mean the boy has no determination, no perseverance, no traits whatsoever that should be shown before he was reincarnated with his memories. I mean not just that, the grammar isnt getting any better at all like what the actual F***. The Author says that he is training his writing skills, truth is, he says he is Brazilian and we should forgive him for typos when he gives absolutely no fucks about improving and just says those at the end of the chapter to have an excuse at not correcting his grammar mistakes. He hasn't improved at all and I don't know how people can manage to give this a 5 star I mean full of inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, hypocrite-like author and worst of all he doesn't even bother improving and just uses excuses.
I like it! It may be slow in the beginning, but you find a really good novel if you read past the 'mortal' life in which our mc find himself unbearable weak. Not to say this part is not good, but our mc sure doesn't find himself in the best of spots. Something I'm sure the author does to show us the barbaric ways of this new world.But I sure recommend people try it ?
I have always been writing fanfiction stories before, but this is the first time I write my own character so I don't know what kind of feels the reader can feel from my character's personality, and personally, I'm not really confident about this story since there is so much better story about reborn/reincarnation here besides mine and my English's kind of sucks. But here's I am proudly present to you my novel of being reborn and revenge.
Its okay. The characters are very not not funny not funny funny. Its a funny novel. But it needs more chapters. Even though the novel might be new I suggest that you make 10 chapters before you actually release your novel. Think about it, you can go back and chech your spelling after you release your chapters.
I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!
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I adored this story this world these characters. I wish it would never end.
Little to no idea of what's going on story wise, main character is random at best, wakes up in a new world and is okay with it and acting like he knows what's going on like he has a great plan when we the readers don't even understand what he's doing and why but it just works, suddenly a love interest that make no sense and happens like i saved you now love me, then they split up and the more plans that you don't know about or understand.
Holy, awesome intro. The starting has me captivated. Really interested to see how this novel turns out to be. Looking forward to future publishes!
Reincarnation, cultivation, adventure... all are my favourite tags! Also, the first few chapters looked very promising and I didn't find any error. Hope to read more. Good luck, author!
As the author mentioned, the book is similar to the holy grail of novels 'reverend Insanity' world-building, and the author's method to set the stage is simply fantastic. The update stability is perfect, from beginning to current there has always been 1 chapter a day except for 1 or 2 rare instances, writing quality is up to a very high standard as well, overall its a really good book and it has potential to be even better as the author gather's experience, would definitely suggest a read, keep up the good work author!