its quite a random story, with such an unexpected plot, the characters are quite interesting with all of then having problems and difficulties, overall the story is quite nice, it lives up too its Dark Realism story.
ok let's get this straight at first I was hype but then I read the story all that hype came crashing down I've read 12 chaps but from what I can see it's not what author said mans was RUTHLESS and now he gives af about a sickly sister I don't understand you said he always thinks rationally so if he used his brain he would know that he gets nothing from saving that child I understand you want character development but you should have never gave him Avis emotion thats a turn off for me
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Although I have seen like 10 books similar to this, this is also a different ability for the same concept. Do you even understand all that mumbo jumbo talk btw.Basically I said still the same color but a different shade
Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine
Amazing Novel. There is so much potential in this and I just really hope that you do not drop this novel because these type of novels often do get dropped in the early stages. Honestly though, if you change the book cover to something more mainstream and do around 3 of your current length chapters per week, then you will definitely get more readers and recognition because your writing quality and storyline is top notch. ?
This is a good novel, unfortunately it is one of MAdsnails abandoned (permanent Hiatus) novels that ended in 2012 .-__-........................................
I would like to tell that I love your Work Author, please keep writing, I will always be here to support you, I love all of your works. <3 <3
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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