Novel with good development, well written characters and a slowly created world. A very interesting system and even the cliches are well used. I expect great things from this work.
Had to drop at chapter 251. Can't read this idiocy anymore.
While the story is interesting and author has a good imagination, he is mostly unable to use logic and common sense.
If somebody actually using his head was there instead of MC, he would be a universe hegemon by now, with trillions of MPs under his belt.
There are so many ways to develop the inn and make money using all of the unique advantages, but the MC just doesnt see those or uses them.
There are also many times when logic is sacrificed for plot or even outright mentioned in the story that the reason is because of plot hole, breaking 4th wall many times.
The end result is a story that is interesting to read, but constantly breaks immersion when another impossible event happens that doesnt make sense within the rules of the universe established by the author.
There is only so much time I can look past this until it just become too much to ignore.
A pity, as the imagination, description and plot are otherwise solid and interesting. If only the author would actually think through his plot points...
This is it...this is the book that made me have a liking to Harem...I love the way each of the female characters are not felt like they r left out
Love your work Seraph
The grammar makes it hard to read; I implore the author to use a grammar checker and have a friend review the writing beforehand. It is evident by the first chapter of this.
In my opinion, if the translation and updates section were removed, this story would only get a 3.0 rating.Why?Well, for starters, although the world background looks well thought out, it isn't that great, in my opinion - at least at the beginning, since we don't know much about the wider scope. All we know is the sect - I mean, come on, at least tell us what's beyond the sect and it's scope of influence at the beginning, so we know what we're dealing with and how much to sympathize with the travel and influence systems of the MC's world.Next, let's take a look at character design. All I have to say for this is that there's nothing riveting about the character design. Also, I have a hundred different impressions of the MC because of this storytelling.Speaking of which, the storytelling. I have to say, the plot idea of the author was amazing, but his storytelling was not quite up to mark. He seems to be trying to speed up and breeze through everything, but if you're gonna explain, try and explain everything.Also, if you read my books and think I'm a hypocrite, you're free to think so - it's because I contracted Author's Disease - the disease where suddenly every book other than yours is more interesting to you, so you read them and don't write yours.
I dig this novel. It is easy to read, but with depth, and the characters are lifelike and the MC is very sympathetic, and you really get the sense that the author cares for this book. The events make sense, and still there is always something that leaves you wanting to read more. The core concept in the synopsis should, hm, also make you interested in the book. And I love the action scenes as well! Would recommend this to other readers as well. Thank you, author.
Another trash trial novel.Too many plot whole and nothing is consistent.plus mc isn't the brightness of people...............................
Overall, I like the structure of this story and I think it has potential, but I am disappointed with the slower pace. Maybe the novel will pick up the pace once a "Tribe" is formed between the various characters. Author definitely seems like they have a direction and the main cast all have some personality instead of one dimensional characteristics. Good:-game seems interesting-blend of real world and video game which gives life to characters and makes the world seem more real-No line up of jade beauties trying to get into MC's pants just cause he has a pulse [as of latest chapter, 86]-MC is not a money obsessed like a lot of video game genre MCs on this siteBad:-I am current through chapter 86 and there has been no kingdom building, no romance, and no e-sports. The novel is interesting though it seems more like a cultivation novel where almost all of the focus is on the main character being a "trash" with a cute little sister type character doing a VERY long training montage with stat increases instead of changes in realms.-way too much early focus on press conferences and other news segments that have little story relevance [at least as of chapter 86]-characters responding to the smallest conflict between each other as "do they hate me?" if you have been friends and close for over a decade and the one little thing makes you think that they hate you, that is just rough.-There are some grammar errors though nothing that makes it impossible to understand what is going on in the story.
Trash there wanna be a hero vibes .
My siblings and I all read this book, and it's no surprise why. The story is amazing, a mix of both comedy and tragedy, with hints of romance, at least in my opinion. If I have any complaints it'll be that the mc is so sadistic, but I guess that's one of his charms?
What should I say?Just read the book, man!You want everything that a reader wants, you can have it.As for the rest, you can just use your own feeling to continue reading it or not.
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