makenzie6902
This novel is well written, catches you right from the start, and makes you wonder what will happen next. I would say author writes lots of details and explanation to help you understand the situation.Love that it is about Alexander The Great!Only suggestion is too much information at the start may turn readers off.BUT!I suggest you give it a read! It is entertaining and fun.
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honestly I like the story so far and I want to see how it develops further since it has a nice concept, i wonder how the whole stroy will play out since there seems to be room for many routs and even the chance of a new one we would never see coming like if all the characters decided poly was the way to go since the theory two head is better than one why not multiple heads <(^3^)>you did an awesome job author sama for the first book writen and kinda published and I hope you decide to continue it and although I've read it today I will be following g it development further in chapters and comment every now and then!
I just started reading it and im already liking it ahhh ????u200d♀️
Everything is great. But truly, I only wanted to review to comment on the irony of the title and the cover.My friend, if you wish to become the perfect specimen, please don't go following Voldemort's footsteps. ? lmaoStory's great though, and even if the concept of a perfect being isn't all that unique, it's still pretty uncommon, and as I haven't read the book yet due to my rush to comment on the irony, Imma just leave it all as 5stars
The Mc is pretty smart but not overly so, adapts quickly and the plot is pretty good.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hello Everyone, finally here to right a self review.So here's what you should expect from the novel- Semi Game System(you will know what i mean after like 10 chaps), Dark Worlds (like don't expect it to be all goody good out their), Comedy,Romance, Monarchy system.As for the MC he is going to be total Bad Boy as we go down XD This is my first novel so please don't at all hesitate to criticize it, i love to learn from my mistakes.Also if you have any doubts please mention them here as it is easy to acknowledge them here.P.S- I am going to increase the chapter release soon.THANKS FOR READING, AUTHOR OUT !
I only read the first 30 or so chapters. Nothing about the MC is likeable. He is weak AF, he is dumb AF. Author seems to be kinda forcing a character development, forcing a romance from the start?Dunno, I guess this just isn't my cup of tea.
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i rarely give commets, but this novel is the trash of fkin trash. Idiotic MC, Selfish, and stupid very fast paced forward storyline. Even the author is lazy to make things better, dont fkin waste your time here.
Great long time since I read such greatness..... .,.......................................................................................
I love this so much. I just stabled upon this and I'm wailing in a puddle of tears because it hasn't been updating. Please update soon! I'm supporting this novel!
