Writing and everything is okay but need some improvement. still keep it up and can you please upload chapters a bit longer. I feel like it's around 1100 words but if you are uploading 1 chapter we day, Can you make it 1500 words? it is depend on you but I need more chapters
anyone else unhappy with being required to pay spirit stones to read chapters? last chapter I read required 13... Every day I check in I get 10 spirit stones. at the end of the day, those stones go away. So I need to lose on spirit stones, eventually having to actually buy them, just to read the chapters.... I liked it better when I could just agree to watch an ad.
So this story has basically everything one can get in cliche.
A cliche ntr'd Mc
A weak to Op Mc
Easy to get Harem Members
A lot of common troupes.
And my final review?
It's good, I mean freaking good if you just ignore the writing quality which is a bit bad, but well I have read thousands of novels, cliche, or whatnot and I have enough common sense to tell if a story with cliches is good or bad.
Mc isn't a beta JP or CP and becomes fairly smart and cunning after receiving one blow after another quite early, he gets women using his cunningness despite it having some cliche elements the end result is quite satisfactory.
What are the good points of this novel?
1) Good No, of Chapters.
2) Stable updates(I am not sure about this, I mean Author is giving regular chapters but it can change anytime considering he is going in university)
3) Good World Building( World Building is satisfactory at least till I have read, only things necessary to the current story are explained which are simple and easy to remember, it also gives Author huge flexibility when he will expand the world-building later on)
4) Good Characters( Mc of the novel is a guy with flaws, but they aren't the flaws one would normally dislike at least during the later chapters, I mean he is using his cunningness and dominating all the women he wants to, no simply act or something, seriously I would have given a 1-star review if Mc was like that, those type of Mc's are super annoying following females like dogs, but yes his flaws are not something that will make you dislike him, he has a quite likable personality as well leaning more towards a smart villain than an honest good guy, but yup he isn't a straight up villain either.
And yeah other female characters have been fleshed out well as well, I mean it's not something excellent but at least you can't just dislike them for lack of any character.)
Now, what is bad about this Novel?
1) A lot of cliches are used though they aren't bad at all, I mean Author is new and he thankfully managed to put off these cliches quite well.
2)Writing Quality is not excellent but quite good.
3)Mc has flaws, some major ones which get 100% better as the story goes on but doesn't changes the fact some of his flaws might be disliked by some of the readers(Don't worry no simpy or beta Mc)
My Final Review?
4.6 stars which will definitely be shown as mere 4 stars
Promising synopsis,
But very, VERY poor execution. It's a shame.
Reads like a significantly worse version of losing money to be a Tycoon.
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Ahhh I really really really love this novel!!!! This is such a frigging sad novel, the little boy never catch a break! The original translation use 'Death Sutra' as the title, I think that's more compelling.
Everybody please read this novel. There is not an ounce of wish fulfilling fantasy, and the author bully and bully and bully our poor mc relentlessly. So all of us need to support him!
I like this adaptation of Naruto it's very interesting and cool I also like Sasuke being jealous
Found this book not too long ago and so far its pretty good, lots of face smacking moments,hahaha.
MC actually focuses on his plans for the most part unlike most other business stories. I like that you get to see the step by step process on how he does things. Anyway keep up the good work, your in my library now!
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One of my favorite novels here and it hurts to see the price per chapter.
*sighs* Wait time for my new Exploooosion Magic.
O crucible which melts my soul, scream forth from the depths of the abyss and engulf my enemies in a crimson wave!
Pierce trough, the black clouds of Heaven and Earth!
EXPLOSION!
This novel is just amazing. The author is hitting every point if he wanted to write a novel containing every single bad thing about cultivation novels. in addition to that, author is super rude to readers when he is totally in wrong. he thinks that fictional novels mean that it should have no logic. he doesn't even accept his math errors. other than that, he is just copying and pasting other novels with absolutely zero originality. i mean it starts with mc finding alchemist making wrong pill and just act all mighty to correct him. then he finds the disease of the emperor's daughter next second. i mean i don't think i even need to say anymore
10/5 story so far i want more vengeance >:D more blood muahahahahahh
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A rare gem on this site. It reminds me a bit of Terror Infinity and that is a rare feeling to have these days. Anyone who enjoys the horror or survival genre should come on down and give it a chance to read!